Good plot with interesting development. It gets better and better as you progress through chapters. Please revise your own work by double checking it once you finished a chapter, there are some grammar mistakes that I am not fond of. Continue with the amazing work and be a bit more patient as you go through it
daylightmoon123445
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LIKEHey hey, thanks for your honest review, will work on the grammar mistakes, and don't worry, I might've been hasty the first five chapters but I started to re-check my chapters after that. I will correct all the typos there and glad that you still think it's good lol. I'll admit that I'm an impatient person but I'll try to slow down things a notch.