I'm so glad you have decided to give your story a start and end, unlike many authors who stretch it out till it loses its essence. Then you're right to lock it early! Loving it so far <3

Starting strong, I see. I am pleasantly surprised by...everything in this novel! 1. The writing quality, I see an excellent use of grammatical structures and punctuation, there would be no problem for the reader to stop and re-read because they couldn't understand what you say(great job there :) ) 2. The plot: Cruel, sad and romantic, everything checks, so I think the only thing left to do is...keep writing this nice story. 3. The stability of updates: I see the chapters locked at 16, unless you plan to finish this story between 50-70 chapters this might not be a great idea :( Overall, this is a great story and I love how you bring your story to life with your words and works, and I hope to see more!

I don't know for sure for now(it seems like I strayed away from 'just 20 chapters' a long time ago lol), but I seem to like the idea of adding lore tidbits and different paths(I thought of it since the start, actually) and it seems like there might be a part 2, seeing there is a tragic ending for part 1. Stay strong soldier, this is not the end 🫡

lol she's just dumb ig

loll been waiting for your comment faithful reader, tis time we change things up a bit ;)

Hey, you know what they say? The true horror is none other than reality itself.

bruh I'm wheezing you're literally the life-force of this story loll

**insert phonk**

loll

My brain is not braining because I know I read half of that wrong. But based on the first and last sentence, it's like you're trying to tell me that punctuation isn't the main thing that's missing here. I don't think I would get a large following doesn't matter how large the amount of my chapters is. There is no 'rule', it's more of an unspoken condition, and it's what the readers want(subconsciously) in webnovel. Readers usually avoid chapters less than 100 chapters, so to get to at least 10k I might need at least 50 chapters.

I also feel like you woke up and chose violence loll[img=update]

I've used it in arbitrary places my entire life! Now I know where to put it, it's one less thing to worry about.

hmmm...that might be a cause. Elaborate...

loll no he hasn't.

Well in webnovels they encourage you to make 'arcs' or 'volumes' so you can make the chapters under the same name.

Yes, you get paid for the words. Believe it or not, bro, if you open up a premium contract from Webnovel all their benefits are based on your wordcount.

OMG I was thinking the same thing. But I've noticed that word count matters the most here...

Hey everyone, shameless self-review here! This story is completely and exclusively free(!) for all my readers because I care more about them and their pockets! There will be no locked chapters, donations, Patreon, Tikkie, basically no money, even if you force the money down my throat(sheesh, they get it author!). There are multiple reasons why, they are listed on the auxiliary volume, you can read more if you are interested(although literally no one reads it lol). So, coming to the writing part, I try to make it legible and want to finish this story soon(after my exams of course) because I have a habit of leaving things unfinished, but let me stick to my guns and try to finish it in a month(to a year :p ). The stability is okay, it's reliable once I get into the schedule(~cause I'm only human!!!). The development is pretty good though, not gonna lie. it's kind of a mystery with lore and an escape room plot(I love lore, thank you matpat, for inspiring me, too bad he's leaving :_( The character design is good, the world background is good, the character design is stellar and all I can say is if you want something fun but also shorter to pass time but also want to keep yourself engaged, and want to have that feeling of 'what's next, what would happen next?', then I would recommend reading it. The (first) book consists of 125 chapters, with 1250 words in each chapter. Each room has 2-3 parts, and there are 50 rooms in total. There, I've said everything I want to, oh wait, I forgot something! First.

A little late, but they are not the real author of this book.

Hey, I just saw your review, and thank you anyway for the rating. I don't believe in getting revenue from these kinds of sites, but I see you're beginning something and you need some variation(and I thought about it, and it doesn't hurt to get even a little exposure), so I gave some thought about it and submitted my novel in your site. I hope it helps you in the long run and wish you success on your site. All I expect and hope you will do is keep my novel safe and secure from copyright issues.