Honestly, I don't understand the 4 stars reviews. This is pure masterpiece. I actually liked everything. Story telling, characters, the plot, no mistakes. It's a lovely book probably written by an amazing person. Please keep writing! I haven't read many books on the website as I am too focused on my novel, but this is the best one so far.

Lovely story telling. The story has yet to progress as there are only 2 chapters, but it seems great so far. Some punctuation mistakes, but apart from that, I see no downsides at all. [img=recommend]

Mysterious and captivating. Got my interest from the very first paragraph. amazing work, my man. I only read once chapter, but I can't wait to read the next ones. I'll add it to my library for sure😊

Hi guys! The shameless 5 star review from the author. I put everything I had into this web novel and I will continue with the same effort and passion. Please reply to this comment if you have any questions and I'll be happy to help.[img=recommend]

Nice idea you got there which got me hooked instantly! A bit too many mistakes for my like and the story feels a bit rush. Please include more description, your story barely started. Leaving that to the side, the idea is great with HUGE POTENTIAL. Please update it asap and revise the chapter before posting it.

Good plot with interesting development. It gets better and better as you progress through chapters. Please revise your own work by double checking it once you finished a chapter, there are some grammar mistakes that I am not fond of. Continue with the amazing work and be a bit more patient as you go through it

more attention please

The plot is interesting, quite a few spelling mistakes here and there, but a nice start

Damn, that was quite good. You got some talent for sure. I just feel to you could've maybe add a bit more world background and description. Apart from that, nice and idea and good storytelling. Well done!