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DaoistjcJwtW
DaoistjcJwtWLv12yr
2023-01-03 22:51

Muy buena la historia pero estoy viendo que lo vas dejar abandonado como las demás historia Haci termina danmachi sigue el capítulo no la dejes abandonada

Danmachi: Reincarnation With System

Dangerouskitty
4.4
132 Chs

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Reistlan
ReistlanLv3

beautifully written fanfic, except for one thing: water. there's too much of it. it feels like I'm reading a Chinese novel about cultivation, which describes every day of his being in meditation for 100 years. too much unnecessary and not timely inserted information. information about the world itself stretched over sooooooooo many chapters. so there isn't much that's really new in this piece. read 20 chapters. I see no point in reading further. Google translate.

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Jersbears
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Reveal spoiler

2yr
AnimeWrite
AnimeWriteLv1

Good fanfiction ! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😑👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Mr_Serialwala
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Author, MOre Chapter!!! 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎🐓🐓🐓🐓🐓🐓🐓🐓😎😎😎🤪😝😝😟😝😝😟😑😑👍😟😋😁😅😂🙄🐱😡🐱😭😝🙄

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Tom_22
Tom_22Lv1

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Bleckends
BleckendsLv4

This is a copy from a chinnense fanfic named 混迹在地错世界的卑鄙外乡人 who had 620 chapter Is the same history he just change the name of mc the other are the same

2yr
Rimuru_Tempest_9546
Rimuru_Tempest_9546Lv1

Wow!, after a long time, I find a potential danmachi fic. Writing quality is also good for me as my native isn't English, and I didn't need a god-level grammar. *sigh...I just hope, one day my writing skills will at your level. And yeah nothing to say, as there are only a few chapters uploaded and yeah author did you use any app for editing grammar or paraphrasing the paragraph Go forward Author-san.

2yr
Voidking223
Voidking223Lv12

Reveal spoiler

2yr
CallmeCyrus0409
CallmeCyrus0409Lv4

my review after 17 chapters. writing quality five stars because I have yet to see some grammatical error, sentences that could cause some misunderstandings, or misspellings. Story development five stars because the plot of the novel is not so forced or have plotholes. nothing too generic so far, or forced romance and etc. Hoping that these trend continue. 3 star character design, because the original work except the authors OC is others art, so lets respect the Original Artist for his works. Updating Stability five stars because according to your stats at updating seems pretty stable at one chap a day. World background three stars because again, just a respect for the original creator of Danmachi universe.

2yr
Dr200
Dr200Lv10

Stop with the exclamation marks it is ruining the dialogue of the story

2yr
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