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Reistlan
ReistlanLv32yr
2022-07-03 17:15

beautifully written fanfic, except for one thing: water. there's too much of it. it feels like I'm reading a Chinese novel about cultivation, which describes every day of his being in meditation for 100 years. too much unnecessary and not timely inserted information. information about the world itself stretched over sooooooooo many chapters. so there isn't much that's really new in this piece. read 20 chapters. I see no point in reading further. Google translate.

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it's Chinese bro.

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