Item: Danmachi: Reincarnation With System
Rating: 4.2
Author: CallmeCyrus0409

CallmeCyrus0409Lv42yr

2022-06-04 15:08

my review after 17 chapters. writing quality five stars because I have yet to see some grammatical error, sentences that could cause some misunderstandings, or misspellings. Story development five stars because the plot of the novel is not so forced or have plotholes. nothing too generic so far, or forced romance and etc. Hoping that these trend continue. 3 star character design, because the original work except the authors OC is others art, so lets respect the Original Artist for his works. Updating Stability five stars because according to your stats at updating seems pretty stable at one chap a day. World background three stars because again, just a respect for the original creator of Danmachi universe.

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