Review Detail of Johnathon_Magus in A Foreigner's Chat Group
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If anyone reads this I thought this was good originally. Author follows the plot for most anime, games etc. Nothing new or original. However the author goes or will go the gender bend route. MC turns into a Loli author thought it was cool. To be frank for me makes no sense. Says it temporary but author does it more than once. It shouldn’t even be a thing but he makes it one. So your hoping for masculine goes outside the canon plot. Is not willing to pursue a girl’s who is close to the other anime MC’s. Loses all self respect for me and the audience. No one asked for gender confusion. Wish there was tag to save me time from investing in this novel. Welp hope this helps anyone. Peace.
A Foreigner's Chat Group
IdleYoungMaster
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you know, for me, just like woman clothing, It's either none at all, or endless time, so saying he doesn't use it often doesn't cut it, I like the story and only at the start but I think I'll stop here too, thank for writting thou.
IdleYoungMaster:To clarify on something here: 1.) He'll only turn into a loli during his transformation, thus the reason why its temporary. He returns back to his previous form otherwise. It's not like he'll use it often. Meaning, this is the normal harem fic with slow burn romance, not the gender bend route. 2.) People has different definitions of everything. Perhaps that's why we have a clash of viewpoints. 3.) Sorry for wasting your invested time. Lastly, thanks for your suggestions, brother. It really helped me create new oc powers. I'm really grateful about those daily suggestions of yours.
To clarify on something here: 1.) He'll only turn into a loli during his transformation, thus the reason why its temporary. He returns back to his previous form otherwise. It's not like he'll use it often. Meaning, this is the normal harem fic with slow burn romance, not the gender bend route. 2.) People has different definitions of everything. Perhaps that's why we have a clash of viewpoints. 3.) Sorry for wasting your invested time. Lastly, thanks for your suggestions, brother. It really helped me create new oc powers. I'm really grateful about those daily suggestions of yours.
IdleYoungMaster:To clarify on something here: 1.) He'll only turn into a loli during his transformation, thus the reason why its temporary. He returns back to his previous form otherwise. It's not like he'll use it often. Meaning, this is the normal harem fic with slow burn romance, not the gender bend route. 2.) People has different definitions of everything. Perhaps that's why we have a clash of viewpoints. 3.) Sorry for wasting your invested time. Lastly, thanks for your suggestions, brother. It really helped me create new oc powers. I'm really grateful about those daily suggestions of yours.
IdleYoungMaster:To clarify on something here: 1.) He'll only turn into a loli during his transformation, thus the reason why its temporary. He returns back to his previous form otherwise. It's not like he'll use it often. Meaning, this is the normal harem fic with slow burn romance, not the gender bend route. 2.) People has different definitions of everything. Perhaps that's why we have a clash of viewpoints. 3.) Sorry for wasting your invested time. Lastly, thanks for your suggestions, brother. It really helped me create new oc powers. I'm really grateful about those daily suggestions of yours.
IdleYoungMaster:PS: You can expect the gender swap ONLY during the fights where he uses it.
To answer your remaining questions: 1.) Each fights with that aspect is roughly planned already. In each of those, only MC, the enemy, and another chat group member whom he treats as a friend is present. 2.) I didn't mean that becoming a loli is cool, rather I planned him to be a "cool loli". PS: I don't want to make this farewell one without any unclarified questions/misunderstandings ╥﹏╥ Heavy spoilers below... x x x x x x x xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx ======Spoilers======================================= In two cases, he's planned to be with Roman, one on a certain world while the another is during the Goetia fight. The last one is a fight against Arknights' one of the strongest Feranmuts, the 'crazy' second brother of Nian, Dusk, and Ling. He might also use it against Olga Marie u, but that's in the far future. =====================================================
IdleYoungMaster:To answer your remaining questions: 1.) Each fights with that aspect is roughly planned already. In each of those, only MC, the enemy, and another chat group member whom he treats as a friend is present. 2.) I didn't mean that becoming a loli is cool, rather I planned him to be a "cool loli". PS: I don't want to make this farewell one without any unclarified questions/misunderstandings ╥﹏╥ Heavy spoilers below... x x x x x x x xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx ======Spoilers======================================= In two cases, he's planned to be with Roman, one on a certain world while the another is during the Goetia fight. The last one is a fight against Arknights' one of the strongest Feranmuts, the 'crazy' second brother of Nian, Dusk, and Ling. He might also use it against Olga Marie u, but that's in the far future. =====================================================
Alex1911:you know, for me, just like woman clothing, It's either none at all, or endless time, so saying he doesn't use it often doesn't cut it, I like the story and only at the start but I think I'll stop here too, thank for writting thou.
IdleYoungMaster:PS: You can expect the gender swap ONLY during the fights where he uses it.
??? If you're talking about the plot, it seems that you've misunderstood a bit from this review. That arc is the only arc where they follow a part of the plot until everything diverges completely from the canon (all are done for convenience). If you'd read further, you'll know that there's the Madoka Arc and the Fate Arc, both of which went sideways when MC and co intervened.
JohnnieWalker:thanks if I have to read a fanfic just to follow the plot, I would go for the original. thanks for the sacrifice!
IdleYoungMaster:??? If you're talking about the plot, it seems that you've misunderstood a bit from this review. That arc is the only arc where they follow a part of the plot until everything diverges completely from the canon (all are done for convenience). If you'd read further, you'll know that there's the Madoka Arc and the Fate Arc, both of which went sideways when MC and co intervened.
Wow that's a huge spoiler and also little disappointing, here I think that the great fights he can fight in cool form but he actually turns to op cool loli, I can't explain what I'm feeling right now. I just hope he can get rid of weird transformation because honestly it's not that interesting just turn him into monster or flying gun whatever but loli is weird.
IdleYoungMaster:To answer your remaining questions: 1.) Each fights with that aspect is roughly planned already. In each of those, only MC, the enemy, and another chat group member whom he treats as a friend is present. 2.) I didn't mean that becoming a loli is cool, rather I planned him to be a "cool loli". PS: I don't want to make this farewell one without any unclarified questions/misunderstandings ╥﹏╥ Heavy spoilers below... x x x x x x x xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx ======Spoilers======================================= In two cases, he's planned to be with Roman, one on a certain world while the another is during the Goetia fight. The last one is a fight against Arknights' one of the strongest Feranmuts, the 'crazy' second brother of Nian, Dusk, and Ling. He might also use it against Olga Marie u, but that's in the far future. =====================================================
Noted. It won't be as noticeable as others think as well (since the latter arcs have him use clones as a strategy).
Chaos_Order8:Wow that's a huge spoiler and also little disappointing, here I think that the great fights he can fight in cool form but he actually turns to op cool loli, I can't explain what I'm feeling right now. I just hope he can get rid of weird transformation because honestly it's not that interesting just turn him into monster or flying gun whatever but loli is weird.