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Johnathon_Magus1yrReplied to Touji_sanThe entity seems to enjoy nodding since he nodded again. – "When an author disappears, the people around them will feel the disappearance despite not remembering the author... His loved ones such as friends and family will not remember him and they will feel that they lost something valuable which will lead them to an inexplicable depression… Viewers who enjoyed his work will feel a permanent emptiness that, in extreme cases, it can drive them to suicide from the sheer boredom of living… Authors need viewers in the same way that viewers need authors…"- Johnathon_Magus1yrReplied to Touji_san"The biggest problem with meaningless characters is that the holes in the fourth wall don't close even if the character dies" – The entity looked back at the hole full of letters. – "Each hole is a wound in the multiverse… If many wounds accumulate, the multiverse will die… Authors will no longer have creativity… Viewers will no longer have entertainment… Everything will perish"
- Johnathon_Magus1yrPosted
Yeah the story is about some guy who is named Lusi Santos GTA anyone? Anyway the story get’s stupid even the author admiting he uses this just to vent. It’s more like a parody than an actual story. Like a college kid’s wet dream and nihilist view’s bemoaning life itself. MC is trash,scumbag,and a manipulator. So if your hoping for a romance which is founded on truth. Nothing here but lies so yeah. So many girl’s added like Pokemon with no real development. Author tends to forget them. Updating stability abysmal. World development either too vauge or just info dump’s. Alway’s been show don’t tell author does not succeed on that front. If your expecting any tension or seriousness in the story this ain’t the place. Powerscaling is a joke. Basically it’s a parody that makes fun of itself and everything around it. The MC complain’s every moment of the story like bruh just shut up it’s so annoying. Multiple POV’s can work at time’s while it also fall’s flat. Character’s are either one dimensional or complex but don’t show up again. Overall too many character’s set up with no context. If there is it’s too much and we never explore MC background like my guy where are the flashback’s? It’s just mentioned that is all. Don’t tell me just show me! You see too many situations like that. So much 4th wall breaking to point the author is just talking. Overall a waste of time better spent elsewhere on a story with actual focus. I can sum up this story in one word in chaos just take out the fun. Nonsensical in the parody genere. Welp hope this helped anyone peace.
- Johnathon_Magus1yrCommentedCh 289 Chapter 282: Sleep
- Johnathon_Magus1yrCommented"The biggest problem with meaningless characters is that the holes in the fourth wall don't close even if the character dies" – The entity looked back at the hole full of letters. – "Each hole is a wound in the multiverse… If many wounds accumulate, the multiverse will die… Authors will no longer have creativity… Viewers will no longer have entertainment… Everything will perish"
- Johnathon_Magus1yrCommentedThe entity seems to enjoy nodding since he nodded again. – "When an author disappears, the people around them will feel the disappearance despite not remembering the author... His loved ones such as friends and family will not remember him and they will feel that they lost something valuable which will lead them to an inexplicable depression… Viewers who enjoyed his work will feel a permanent emptiness that, in extreme cases, it can drive them to suicide from the sheer boredom of living… Authors need viewers in the same way that viewers need authors…"
- Johnathon_Magus1yrCommentedAlthough humanity is so stupid that it destroys itself, if the boredom crisis infects all viewers, then everyone will die, which would make the authors lose the purpose of existing, the authors would stop writing and therefore the multiverse would disappear...
- Johnathon_Magus1yrCommented
This guy can’t stop venting.
"When a character crosses the fourth wall, only absolute destruction awaits him… His soul not only disappears, his records, his name, his history, and everything disappears, even his author… There is no trace of his existence and no one will be able to remember him, not even the other authors and spectators…" - Johnathon_Magus1yrCommented"When the fourth wall is broken by a stupid author it's not the end of the world, over time the multiverse repairs itself, and everything keeps going, the stupidity of a single individual is not enough to destroy all fiction..."
- Johnathon_Magus1yrCommented
When the story becomes too meta and the story is a joke.
"Second... In some unlikely and theoretically impossible way, a character manages to touch the true fourth wall and destroy it... I don't mean just talking to viewers and authors, I mean destroying the line that separates fact from fiction..." - Johnathon_Magus1yrReplied to Bukaro
You can’t separate yourself from your work and be objective that’s just sad.
Sometimes it seems like I smoked some illicit substance, but I swear I'm not on drugs, I'm just addicted to caffeine... - Johnathon_Magus1yrReplied toSometimes it seems like I smoked some illicit substance, but I swear I'm not on drugs, I'm just addicted to caffeine...
- Johnathon_Magus1yrCommentedSometimes it seems like I smoked some illicit substance, but I swear I'm not on drugs, I'm just addicted to caffeine...
- Johnathon_Magus1yrReplied to Bukaro
When I feel you just want your MC to win it’s okay to admit it.
Sometimes it seems like I smoked some illicit substance, but I swear I'm not on drugs, I'm just addicted to caffeine... - Johnathon_Magus1yrReplied to EroosCh 303 Support
- Johnathon_Magus1yrReplied to drunken_undrunkCh 303 Support
- Johnathon_Magus1yrCommented
Meh think the author could have better LOL MC that’s just me though. For instance this guy.
Ekko Makena Afia( Oc) - Johnathon_Magus1yrCommentedCh 283 Chapter 263