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Not_A_Nenuphar
Not_A_NenupharLv42yr
2022-10-05 14:42

Good enough writing, And a pretty good execution. My only problem with this fanfiction is the Author's tendency to just pull stuff from nothing and explain it as background info he'll explain later, most of it is explained later but feels unnecessary for the most part, including the MC background.

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Not_A_Nenuphar
Not_A_NenupharLv4

Don't get me wrong, I like the story a lot but there's some really weird stuff, more so at the beginning! Also Loli MC is the greatest thing ever no matter what anyone says.

IdleYoungMaster
IdleYoungMasterAuthor

Thanks for the review~! It is my first time writing a fic, so what I wrote in the early chapters might not be as good as I've envisioned. I did improve now, which you can see in the further chaps:)

Not_A_Nenuphar:Don't get me wrong, I like the story a lot but there's some really weird stuff, more so at the beginning! Also Loli MC is the greatest thing ever no matter what anyone says.
Not_A_Nenuphar
Not_A_NenupharLv4

You're doing good work, experimenting is just part of the experience!

IdleYoungMaster:Thanks for the review~! It is my first time writing a fic, so what I wrote in the early chapters might not be as good as I've envisioned. I did improve now, which you can see in the further chaps:)
Not_A_Nenuphar
Not_A_NenupharLv4

Also sorry in advance, You'd probably see like a thousand of me wishing death to any and all characters that annoy me on principle, don't take it personally. I just like murder.

IdleYoungMaster:Thanks for the review~! It is my first time writing a fic, so what I wrote in the early chapters might not be as good as I've envisioned. I did improve now, which you can see in the further chaps:)
IdleYoungMaster
IdleYoungMasterAuthor

I did see that a lot...

Not_A_Nenuphar:Also sorry in advance, You'd probably see like a thousand of me wishing death to any and all characters that annoy me on principle, don't take it personally. I just like murder.
AKARYUU
AKARYUULv14

Really? loli mc is great thing? Who dropped u on ur head and forgot to bring to doctors? If mc Is a man he would be man not some trash loli. If sth like that happens he should kill himself to get rid of shame.

Not_A_Nenuphar:Don't get me wrong, I like the story a lot but there's some really weird stuff, more so at the beginning! Also Loli MC is the greatest thing ever no matter what anyone says.
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