Good enough writing, And a pretty good execution. My only problem with this fanfiction is the Author's tendency to just pull stuff from nothing and explain it as background info he'll explain later, most of it is explained later but feels unnecessary for the most part, including the MC background.
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LIKEThanks for the review~! It is my first time writing a fic, so what I wrote in the early chapters might not be as good as I've envisioned. I did improve now, which you can see in the further chaps:)
Not_A_Nenuphar:Don't get me wrong, I like the story a lot but there's some really weird stuff, more so at the beginning! Also Loli MC is the greatest thing ever no matter what anyone says.
Also sorry in advance, You'd probably see like a thousand of me wishing death to any and all characters that annoy me on principle, don't take it personally. I just like murder.
IdleYoungMaster:Thanks for the review~! It is my first time writing a fic, so what I wrote in the early chapters might not be as good as I've envisioned. I did improve now, which you can see in the further chaps:)
Really? loli mc is great thing? Who dropped u on ur head and forgot to bring to doctors? If mc Is a man he would be man not some trash loli. If sth like that happens he should kill himself to get rid of shame.
Not_A_Nenuphar:Don't get me wrong, I like the story a lot but there's some really weird stuff, more so at the beginning! Also Loli MC is the greatest thing ever no matter what anyone says.