TLDR: quick explaination og plots, reasonable character improvement, no 2D personality waifus, and MC NOT DENSE A good fiction novel. My favorite aspects of the story are [resonable good-ending] and [character development]. As a fiction novel, its main goal is to provide the characters with a deserving ending, and the author succeeded in doing so. Not only do the characters receive a good ending, but they also undergo a reasonable growth and improvement in their mentality throughout the story. Unlike some authors who twist the characters original personalities 360° in the aftermath. Another aspect of the novel that I appreciated is the harem. Often, in fiction, the author will simply throw in a collection of waifus for the main character and call it a day. However, in this book, the main character and the women develop their feelings for each other over a long period of time, starting as friends and eventually becoming a couple. It's also worth mentioning that MC is not dense. He realized if a girl is into him or not. And not all women he met end up in the harem. Their relationships are not forced. P.S. It took 200 ch for a girl to be his girlfriend. Fret not! there are romance along the way.

If anyone reads this I thought this was good originally. Author follows the plot for most anime, games etc. Nothing new or original. However the author goes or will go the gender bend route. MC turns into a Loli author thought it was cool. To be frank for me makes no sense. Says it temporary but author does it more than once. It shouldn’t even be a thing but he makes it one. So your hoping for masculine goes outside the canon plot. Is not willing to pursue a girl’s who is close to the other anime MC’s. Loses all self respect for me and the audience. No one asked for gender confusion. Wish there was tag to save me time from investing in this novel. Welp hope this helps anyone. Peace.

This is the first time I've read an Arknights fanfic. The writing quality is good with some confusing dialogues here and there at the start, but overall readable, interesting and not bland, and manages to convey what it wants to the readers(unlike other fanfics on this site with a completely bland writing quality and feels like reading a math book). It's too early to comment about other things but the writing quality is great.

of all things "cool loli" you really choose? i expecting some like cliche where everyone mistaken him as a girl but you really turn him to a girl i didn't play ark night, but i really like this novel so imagine how torture for me to search everything i don't know in google, i kept repeating it until the gender swap part i drop i don't know what kind author fetish have (i was just curious not insulting his fetish, everyone can have different fetish even questionable one) why he choose that setting when he can just give mc item can power him up without gender swap effect

boring...............................................

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I'm not very good at giving reviews Story jumps around too much, introduces too many characters and casts them aside never to be seen again when author finds it convenient Arcs are not really satisfying, too much time is spent on the unimportant things and not enough on character development and interactions (strongest part of the story) The MC is paradoxically too strong and too weak, he has crazy luck and gets many OP powers but it's too many for me to keep track of and they hardly ever matter at all, fights will be as difficult as the author feels like it even if it doesn't make much sense

Boring. Unnecessary power ups and skillsunsatisfying fights Mc turning into loli ? are you sick in the head? even if it is temporary.pacing of the story is also bad.

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