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Angry_Reviewer
Angry_ReviewerLv131yr
2023-02-17 01:52

Waste of time, MC is cowardly, selfish, pathetic and hateful. Why anyone would think people would want to read about a PoS MC like that is incomprehensible.

Alternate World: I Started With Two SSS Templates

Cold Fried Anchovies
2.3
636 Chs

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MightyEagle
MightyEagleLv15

I don’t know if this is just me, but I have trouble reading the novel. I find myself having to re-read sentences or paragraphs. The flow reading is messed up and the transitions between paragraphs are rough.

2yr

GifflarGod
GifflarGodLv14

1. there is no world building no idea what kind of world it is, planet? plane? what are the countries? how their world got the dungeons and wild monsters. 2. No idea how they got their powers originally. How the level system works. if it is just gaining power and leveling like in a game it's stupid 3. there are no strength, agility, stamina stats.. which means basically mc has infinite stamina which is ridiculous 4 just the idea that they have game like skills and level up by killing without anything like energy gathering or physical training or skill training is stupid. too much is so wrong.. this is like a story in a game. like imagine you play a game in ps5 and this story is the story of the game

2yr
Rhongomynaid
RhongomynaidLv1

Dropped at CH 1, this novel is incoherent rubbish. I don't know if the source material is any good or not but what I do know is that this translation is atrociously bad. I'm noticing a trend with Webnovel, they've started putting out more and more literally unreadable novels and as a reader this blatant disrespect really feels like a slap on the face. I cannot make sense of this below MTL level translation. 0/5

2yr
Dark_Eterium
Dark_EteriumLv3

Convoluted, the power system is not well explained, neither is it well introduced, out of nowhere you can apparently engrave runes, engrave ummm bloodlines, and classes??? I thought he already had a class like... bruh, to summarize, it's conbluted, as just corulent as this cumet.

2yr
MoreMercury76
MoreMercury76Lv14

Another trashy trial novel. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

2yr
uflesh940
uflesh940Lv3

Not bad, but has an MC of questionable intelligence, and some weird plots that I didn't really like.

2yr
Criz_Shim
Criz_ShimLv3

The worst in this batch of Trial read. The world building is not well explained like the author to expect us to know it.The power system is also confusing.

2yr
Shad
ShadLv6

The story idea is great but the flow of the story is a mess especially when nearing chapter 40 it just jumps to a story without coherance just making it confusing and lots of details is missing and the idea of changing templates instead of combining them and have an OP MCis just mess up whats the point of having 2 of them and cant use the skills from the other template.

2yr
postpill
postpillLv6

All I can say is that this is fresh despite all the cliché....................................................................................

2yr
Artem_Trey
Artem_TreyLv4

surprisingly not the worst thing I've read, still, I got to chapter 30 then realised I was lost, I have no idea what's happening or why or even how he's getting stronger, so I just quit

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