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SirlordDaDerpWhale
SirlordDaDerpWhaleLv152yr
2022-09-17 11:47

is the mc able to take damage or not, you say in the same sentence multiple times he didn't take any damage yet is somehow fatally wounded? this story makes no sense, and transitions between paragraphs are like getting gut-punched in the brain. Various grammer and spelling errors throughout makes it even worse. If I could give the world building a zero I would, nothing is explained.

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