Review Detail of Xephotor in Time Gap Queen and the Alpha Apex Predators

The grammar does suffer a bit, but gets better as the chapters go on. The pacing is excellent. The sentence flow is near flawless. I’ll probably come back and study it a bit myself. The story is captivating and charming. It has the feeling of a fantasy novel while being grounded in a modern setting. The author has great potential and I look forward to the completion of the novel.