If you like reading something suspenseful and keeps you on the edge, then this novel nails those qualities. Other than the harem it's a good read.

Thanks for the review. Regardless if readers don't like FL, it's my practice to work writing an FL. There is a main ML character and tons of other important secondary character leads as well.

Thank you 😁 I hope you enjoy it.

I hope you enjoy it as much as I love writing.

I wonder if he'll ever get control. 🥺

I am thrilled that you support my novel. I'm so glad you have been enjoying all the suspense and twists. The chapter should be posted later tonight.

I'm so excited to have you as my loyal reader and that you are continuing the vampire series. I hope this next novel turns out far better than the first one. I realize I need to make a lot of corrections in the first book. Thanks for the powerstones. I greatly appreciate them and all your support. Feel free to give me some feedback on the second novel. I hope the FL character will start to show improvement with the flaws she presented in the first novel.

Yes, this novel has been concluded and it will go into the second novel. Anything that is left unanswered will carry over to the second novel called "Reign of the Time Gap Queen" but the storyline takes a different turn since the FL knows the truth about the Collin's enemies since that's what this novel is mostly about. So you finish this one and and start the next novel. This one will end in like a conclusion cliffhanger for the next one to pick up on.

Thank you for your kind words. I am glad to hear that you have been enjoying the storyline a lot with all the twists the plots offer as they read along with ghoul in-between. I've been working really hard to make it entertaining for the readers. As for more wisdom and knowledge, I am hoping the characters' growths will show more in this novel. These characters are built on their emotions, feelings, and what they experience. Past Kai will differ from the present-time Kai in the time gaps. I hope you see improvements in Victoria's character. Her written in first person makes it trickier to write her as a more brilliant character, but I'm working on it. It's the first time writing a novel series like this when I am more familiar with writing horror, but I am learning along the way. Thanks for your feedback.

Thanks for your honest opinions and your kind words. Minus the mistakes I've made with creating the FL, I'm glad you've been still enjoying it and giving it a fair try. I'm taking notes of the mistakes I made with the FL for another novel will write after the vampire novel is completed. Hopefully, now that she has learned the truth, her character will start to get better. Feel free to let me know if you feel it does or not. You should start seeing some character growth with her and a little with Kai, but his won't fully start until the next novel. The second novel did start if you wanted to add it, it's called: Reign of the Time Gap Queen If you click my profile picture, you can find it under my reading list called: Vampire Novel Series This novel will end at Ch 377 and then the second novel picks up from there.

It wasn't my intention to write her like that. It's my first novel with writing something like this. I'm more used to writing horror. Her character is built on the heart, and it was slow burn for her to learn the truth. You are at the part where more questions are going to be answered. Then this novel will end and the storyline will into the next novel. Which will hopefully be better. Thanks for at least giving it a try.

I don't want to give away too much but reread some of the dialogue in Ch: 3. It hints she is losing interest, but everyone else is encouraging her not to give up her dreams, and you already knew Kai never wanted her at the college for these reasons that will come into play. In the first novel, she was determined to achieve her career and goals in life. Her character is going through some changes and growth that will take place in this novel. Off-topic, it is so nice to have you back. I'm glad you found the second novel.

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I'm trying. It takes me time to write and edit each chapter. I try to make sure it's good-quality work before I post. Thanks for the Powerstone.

The easiest way to find the next novel, is you can click my profile picture and find the reading list call: Vampire Novel Series Or you can click the the three dots on the cover of the Time Gap Queen and the Apex Predators. If you scroll past the reviews, it should be listed at my other novels. There's also the search by bar by typing in the name. I hope you can find and start reading today because it had started.

I am so glad to hear you loved reading it.

Sure, my username is sara88#4303

You're very welcome. Do have discord to follow you on?

Thank you. I hope you like this novel and the second. This first novel will be completed soon, but it will still be under-editing. After this novel ends, the second novel, "Reign of the Time Gap Queen," will take the lead in the story.