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Night_Walker001Lv132yr
2022-11-01 17:40

This web novel is great. I rarely write reviews because of my bad English but I want to write a review of this novel. 1. Writing Quality - Writing Quality is Good there are some mistakes and it too improves as story progress. But the main problem lies in understanding who said what. I mean, for example, there is "I know it's you who did this" written But no explanation said this you need to guess who said that but thankfully this rarely happens and you can read this without spoiling your reading experience. 2. Character Development - Character development is one of the main points for me in reading this novel and writing this review. Both ML and FL personalities develop as the story progresses. Anna grows from a narcissistic, Self Center, arrogant, Selfish young master type person to a kindhearted person who helps others Although change is this big it's not forced and understandable. There too are some problems like Anna acting childish even though she is returne and Noel's hate seems somewhat fake and forced but overall it's great. 3. Update stability - Too good to be true. 4. Characteristics - Noel - Kindhearted but if you give him the option to choose between his life or an innocent person's life he definitely chooses himself, Smart person, perfect for an ML. Anna - A little dumb and childish but perfect for FL.

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ShamelessGengarLv1

It's really good, read it on a whim but it was an unexpected gem, was debating on the rating. The grammar is great, plot is great and characters were great, I say were because... In the beginning you can feel MCs hatred for Anna, you know he hates her, you can feel it even he doesn't say it which it is usually described in internal thoughts At around chapter 66ish, I know and appreciate MC can act like he doesn't hate her to take full advantage of her for whatever "evil schemes" she's trying to pull but you no longer feel the hatred, in fact, MC feels a bit complacent, I don't know if it's because there is less of an internal monologue about how much he can't stand her going on but it feels way different, I know Anna said some BS to throw MC off which he fell for and is contemplating but it seems like his hatred is dying down way too quickly, I mean this girl like he said, gave the execution order essentially, his own words, she is responsible for his family's death, his life as a fallen noble, etc, his hatred seems ...shallow at this point is the best I can describe it, it's just different from when we started off and when he was initially acting Now when he says he wants to kill her, it seems more like...what's the phrase....lip service, yea, words without meaning I'm still gonna keep reading of course, it's a great story, just a bit disappointed at how quickly the hatred is gone after someone is responsible for the death of his entire family and he knows for a fact it was her idea (even if she was being used)

SyphilitisLv15

Review (325 chapters) An absolute hidden gem that leaves the readee wanting more and more. Binged in two days and currently at a loss for what to do now since i ran out of chapters. Not going to do an in depth review today but i can strongly give this a top 10. will answer questions any potential reader has for a couple of days. Consistent Male/Female Mc Growth both physically and Psychologically No harem/no real relationship as of yet but it is budding, good romance without being real romance. relationship quality is 10/10 with nothing forced Definitely no cliché’s and feels extremely fresh I dont usually care for dual pov but amazingly done here MC’s arent OP but stronger than their peers due to their circumstances, no powerlevel jumps in fights like alot of novels where mc magically defeats someone 10x stronger and older than him bc the young mc somehow has more experience World background is well done and plenty of room for exploration Writing quality is great but sometimes mixes up who is talking between the mc’s but rare and easily noticable so nothing major System/reincarnation is top notch here Character Emotions are also top notch and i can still explicitly remember the womens emotions ans physical reactions during the bandit extermination 10/10 Good mysteries going on that leave alot of questions and answers to be discovered •Has potention to be one of the best novels on this site and many others when completed. I previously stated top 10 easily but thats just because i cant make up my mind if it takes top 5 right now due to alot of the story left untold as of right now. Note to Author- Amazing work, I am in love with your story and hope you can keep the pace and fully finish it without breaking away to other projects because i believe THIS will be not only your masterpiece, but a true masterpiece on this site with limitless potential. -Syph

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