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Leric
LericLv42yr
2022-06-23 03:50

I have read until chapter 55 and here is my review -Basically perfect grammar -Unique plot -Good storytelling -The Mc Is not completely blinded by revenge like the first time he met her.

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Mr_Babbles
Mr_BabblesLv15

are you sure you ain't pulling my leg about grammar? the summary has grammar mistakes bro

Zom_bloog
Zom_bloogLv3

Most of the guys staying this are people who have English as a second or third language. So to them the grammar is perfect

Mr_Babbles:are you sure you ain't pulling my leg about grammar? the summary has grammar mistakes bro
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ShamelessGengar
ShamelessGengarLv1

It's really good, read it on a whim but it was an unexpected gem, was debating on the rating. The grammar is great, plot is great and characters were great, I say were because... In the beginning you can feel MCs hatred for Anna, you know he hates her, you can feel it even he doesn't say it which it is usually described in internal thoughts At around chapter 66ish, I know and appreciate MC can act like he doesn't hate her to take full advantage of her for whatever "evil schemes" she's trying to pull but you no longer feel the hatred, in fact, MC feels a bit complacent, I don't know if it's because there is less of an internal monologue about how much he can't stand her going on but it feels way different, I know Anna said some BS to throw MC off which he fell for and is contemplating but it seems like his hatred is dying down way too quickly, I mean this girl like he said, gave the execution order essentially, his own words, she is responsible for his family's death, his life as a fallen noble, etc, his hatred seems ...shallow at this point is the best I can describe it, it's just different from when we started off and when he was initially acting Now when he says he wants to kill her, it seems more like...what's the phrase....lip service, yea, words without meaning I'm still gonna keep reading of course, it's a great story, just a bit disappointed at how quickly the hatred is gone after someone is responsible for the death of his entire family and he knows for a fact it was her idea (even if she was being used)

Syphilitis
SyphilitisLv15

Review (325 chapters) An absolute hidden gem that leaves the readee wanting more and more. Binged in two days and currently at a loss for what to do now since i ran out of chapters. Not going to do an in depth review today but i can strongly give this a top 10. will answer questions any potential reader has for a couple of days. Consistent Male/Female Mc Growth both physically and Psychologically No harem/no real relationship as of yet but it is budding, good romance without being real romance. relationship quality is 10/10 with nothing forced Definitely no cliché’s and feels extremely fresh I dont usually care for dual pov but amazingly done here MC’s arent OP but stronger than their peers due to their circumstances, no powerlevel jumps in fights like alot of novels where mc magically defeats someone 10x stronger and older than him bc the young mc somehow has more experience World background is well done and plenty of room for exploration Writing quality is great but sometimes mixes up who is talking between the mc’s but rare and easily noticable so nothing major System/reincarnation is top notch here Character Emotions are also top notch and i can still explicitly remember the womens emotions ans physical reactions during the bandit extermination 10/10 Good mysteries going on that leave alot of questions and answers to be discovered •Has potention to be one of the best novels on this site and many others when completed. I previously stated top 10 easily but thats just because i cant make up my mind if it takes top 5 right now due to alot of the story left untold as of right now. Note to Author- Amazing work, I am in love with your story and hope you can keep the pace and fully finish it without breaking away to other projects because i believe THIS will be not only your masterpiece, but a true masterpiece on this site with limitless potential. -Syph

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