... you know... if you wrote in your synopsys of your novel that mc goes to RWBY with NOTHING BUT his knowledge about the plot... but 5 chapters in he has... cursed energy from jujutsu kaisen. Mana from re: zero, haki from one piece, touki from DxD and more... are you F serious?

I don’t have proper words for how boring and bad this is, 90% of it is just describing things, 8% of MC’s thoughts, and 2% of uninteresting dialogue. An example of what not to do.

All I got to say, the narration is boring. although the concept was fine, and the plot is bland, no character introduction, but self development. don't know it is because I like fast pace. so not for people like me. keep up the good work and improve. all the best.

honestly im not one to do reviews let alone rate badly but this has to be the worst title ive ever seen ................................................

Want a writing tip? Choose ONE anime power system, choose an environment conducive to first arc development, focus on plot development. Your first Gamer story is a thousand times better than this one. Doing this was a huge waste of time and energy, no one likes to read about someone capable of doing anything just by imagining it. Be happy.

I Really Like The FF Although The MC Has A Lot Of Different Power System He Isn't Immediately Op He Is Still Weak Because He Doesn't Have Anyone To Teach Him And He Knows That And He Needs To Research From The Beginning Without Any Guide

you saying that he went to rwby with nothing was a lie. He obviously went with a body that can use tons of different animes energies with the power of bulls#it. The way he unlocked mana was just circulating it though his body or to the 'gate', how does he even know it really exists and how to do it, all he had was a theory, that doesn't mean it should work.

Я очень не доволен. Прочитал до момента попытки Алхимии... УДАЧНОЙ попытки алхимии! И на этом моменте я решил сдаться. Это явно не моя чашка чая. Не хочу читать про героя, который по ПАМЯТИ нарисовал круг и который работал... почему-то! Очень странно. Я был в порядке с проклятой энергией... и попытками героя почувствовать магию. Просто потому что магия в этом аниме есть из канона. Как и проклятая энергия у гримм. Но алхимия... и работает!? Не понятно что с аурой... в общем много странностей и плюс к плохому написанию и сумбурности я ставлю плохие баллы и гневный комментарий.

Pesima historia, sus otros FF estan mucho mejor desarrolados que este, y el sistema de energias es ridiculo aprendio 5 tipos de energias diferentes de Mundos/Realidades diferentes solo por que si, honestamente para ser una reescritura de su otro FF RWBY isekai es muy lamentable

I mean it’s good in the sense that it has no grammar issues, updates regularly, and stuff. 2 Main issues is that most of it is actually just the thoughts of the mc and the rest is him getting broken power like cursed energy in the 2nd chapter, makes the synopsis misleading