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KodiakGod
KodiakGodLv132yr
2022-07-06 17:17

you saying that he went to rwby with nothing was a lie. He obviously went with a body that can use tons of different animes energies with the power of bulls#it. The way he unlocked mana was just circulating it though his body or to the 'gate', how does he even know it really exists and how to do it, all he had was a theory, that doesn't mean it should work.

Isekaied in RWBY

Jovami6729
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... you know... if you wrote in your synopsys of your novel that mc goes to RWBY with NOTHING BUT his knowledge about the plot... but 5 chapters in he has... cursed energy from jujutsu kaisen. Mana from re: zero, haki from one piece, touki from DxD and more... are you F serious?

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PrinceOfThisWorld
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Want a writing tip? Choose ONE anime power system, choose an environment conducive to first arc development, focus on plot development. Your first Gamer story is a thousand times better than this one. Doing this was a huge waste of time and energy, no one likes to read about someone capable of doing anything just by imagining it. Be happy.

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TIFOELLv1

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