Thy cute beggar shall pass down his verdict! Writing Quality: Superb! It's like a beautiful and kind wife; perfect! The grammar has little to no errors. The 'Motivation Reaction Units' is well done, smooth to be exact. The words used are easy to understand, even an elementary grader could understand. And the etc... is good xD. Story Development: Commendable! The way the author weaved the first part and the second part is really praiseworthy! It made the ML and the FL very interesting! Or should I say, "must look forward to" Character Design: Extremely likeable! The ML and the FL is very compatible! I can see a very high potential to their affair. A little visualization is enough to make me grin, thinking, 'How fun will it be?' Updating Stability: The author proclaims her/himself immortal, so it should be easy for her to update. World Background: Refreshing! A new cultivation concept with clear and vivid descriptions. I couldn't wish for more. Overall: 9/10 in my "should read chart". The pacing is light, engaging, and entertaining. Another thing worth praising is the behavior of the people, simply 'hehehe' How to read it in a much better way: Scan the synopsis -> Read the first 3 chaps -> halt and take a look at the auxiliary chapters -> resume reading -> enjoy!
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