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Thank you :)
Yo! The cultured beggar is here to give appraisal~ Of course, this is only after reading the first 8 chapters(currently available chaps). Writing Quality: Superb! Aside from little to no errors, everything was good – from its flow to grammars. Particularly chapter 5? or 6? I appreciate the use of the almost perfect Motivation Reaction Units. Story Development: Intriguing! It leaves you interested on what will happen next. As long as you read the first 3 chapters, it's easy to get engrossed in reading the succeeding chapters. Character Design: Multidimensional, I must say. The dilemma, the conflict, the emotional disarray, everything was weaved at 88% to my liking! Particularly, the FL, she's like a real person; which I appreciate the most. Updating Stability: No worries! I'm a cultured beggar. I live through begging... more chapies. If the author doesn't update, I'll use my secret technique on her! World Background: Interesting! Although not the author's focus; and he/she just described it vivid enough, it was still enough to let me enter the book's world. If the author can add 10% details, the work will certainly be upgraded by a tier! Overall: This beggar has changed and was now stingy at his praises. I created a 'to read or not scale', 1 being don't read, and 10 being the most recommended. According to my overall judgement, this book scored 8/10. 8 = Great potential, and worth reading! Sincerely, Cultured Beggar
Oi oi, I'm curious how old must an elf be to reach their coming age. Also, I find the significance of the coming age vague.
At the fourth and last sentence of the paragraph, I think it should be 'her' instead of 'his'
Holy shit! This is too damn hot! Being one of the first who found this and give review kinda excites me! I have a premonition that this book will be famous soon! As for why? Allow me... Writing Quality: Top notch! Vast vocabulary, yet used simple words most would understand. Grammar errors? Little to none. Simply, high grade! The way the author depicts vivid scenes is commendable! Story Development: If you don't feel hot right now, then you can call me liar. This book is too damn engaging! Try it! This book carried a taste I usually smell to those successful books. Hopefully my guess will be right! Character Design: Simply awesome! Both the FL and the ML are 3 dimensional! I really appreciate it! The duo's character, when weaved into something romance has immense potential! Updating Stability: No idea, the book was only at 4 chapters atm. Yet, it already hooked me. I hope the author will write more. And fast. World Background: If it isn't interesting, then I'll give you the right to be my girlfriend~ Jk, the WB is wondrous! I can vividly picture it! Overall: The author did well in her three golden chapters (chapters 1-3). Add to the intriguing synopsis, it made me look forward to where this book will reach! Goodluck author! Enjoy writing! I'm looking forward to this books future! Also, those who wants to bet with me, just drop a comment and I'm willing to be the banker!
This is my review after reading the first 4 chapters. (The only chapters atm) Writing Quality: Among the originals I've read this one has higher writing quality. The writer's vocabulary is vast. The way she gave details is superb! I admire her mastery of the English language. Story Development: Slice of life is not my cup of tea. Especially a romance one. However, despite my lack of indepth knowledge, I must say that the author has done a good job in the story development. Every scene, and some particular paragraphs would leave you with, "What happened?" thoughts. Thus, saying that the story development enticing is not an understatement. In fact, it was very engaging! Character Design: Aside from missing some deep physical description, the character design is top notch! Self substitution to the character is much easier to do. The characters are appealing. Updating Stability: This... I'm not sure, but I'm willing to give the author 5 stars hoping he/she'll write more. World Background: Usually, the best way to appreciate the world background is through reading at least ten chapters. But, allow me to express my opinion nonetheless. From the first four chapters, I've got the feeling of wanting to find out more. The world background is intriguing. It leaves you curious. Especially the MC's background. Overall: This piece is a nice work! I recommend reading it! Especially to those who are fond of slice of life. You'll really enjoy reading this. From my experience, slice of life stories always gets better the more chapters there are. Sincerely Yours, Curious Cloud
Hard choice indeed 🤣🤣 the choices here are harder than any calculus and differential equations
Woah! that's some high praise! I'm flattered, thank you❤️❤️. and you're right though, starting May 1, I'll update daily or even add some bonuses until I reached the last month for MGS. I need maneh to read huehue🤣
Let me do the honor of being the first few homans to review this book. Writing Quality: Top-notch among the original novels I've read. Story Development: Quite good! It's interesting. From low to high, and it rolls. Character Design: Very interesting! Especially the members of the chat group. What I liked the most is the MC's cheat, it's so self-fulliling. I'm worried of one thing though, the MC is kinda OP, I wonder how the author will control it to bring the best entertainment. Updating Stability: It's good and should be good! World Background: I appreciate the author's creativity in this book. The world he designed is very interesting. Among the hundreds of novels I've read, this one has a unique world background.
What the heck!? So jealous!
I like this introduction!
On the third sentence, are you perhaps referring to him not wanting to walk the path of average?
I kinda feel that there should be a "young man" after the sixteen-year-old. Just sixteen-year-old sounds a little off. It might be a girl or a boy. it interrupts the flow a bit.