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Skabold
SkaboldLv132yr
2022-07-30 04:16

I can write better than the author, so you can guess how terrible the quality is. + lazy author, first few line and it goes " yeah mc is different than other, why ? because its my book and i can say what I want. (and I have no idea why also" it rly show how much time the author did spend in this story. After this Im almost surprise the MC have a name.

I'M GOD, SO WHAT? : Former Protagonist is now my side kick ^^

Painful_truth_
4.6
319 Chs

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Painful_truth_
Painful_truth_Author

This guy is hardcore! Extremely merciless! First thing, there is something called sense of humour and second Nobody commented when I wrote it so how do you expect me to know my mistakes? It's my first novel, never written anything in my whole life, I don't consider my novel worthy that's why it's still for free! I'm learning from my mistakes see the latest chapters! You can clearly see aura of legendary author there! Your review hurts so much!!!

2yr
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tjaredjesthebestbf
tjaredjesthebestbfLv5

where's you're novel and have you written anything?

2yr
Skabold
SkaboldLv13

Talking about grammar. Read my comment and read chapter 1. I could be wrong but I feel like I write better. And if we are talking about how to write a story, then no, im not better than the author.

tjaredjesthebestbf:where's you're novel and have you written anything?
2yr
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Skabold
SkaboldLv13

Yes I am. - we don t have the same sens of humour then. - I can add a few comments, so you can see more clearly what I didn't like. - Don t stop just because of a bad review. Im not able to read your novel, but some might find it great.

Painful_truth_:This guy is hardcore! Extremely merciless! First thing, there is something called sense of humour and second Nobody commented when I wrote it so how do you expect me to know my mistakes? It's my first novel, never written anything in my whole life, I don't consider my novel worthy that's why it's still for free! I'm learning from my mistakes see the latest chapters! You can clearly see aura of legendary author there! Your review hurts so much!!!
2yr
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tjaredjesthebestbf
tjaredjesthebestbfLv5

I'm just asking cause lately, i found some authors have another account for there novels so i just ask you who knows.

Skabold:Talking about grammar. Read my comment and read chapter 1. I could be wrong but I feel like I write better. And if we are talking about how to write a story, then no, im not better than the author.
2yr
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Painful_truth_
Painful_truth_Author

Nobody was coming here so I will be shameless enough to rate it, but I guarantee this novel ain't waste and is definitely worth it and your suggestion can be very helpful, please point out my mistakes so I can correct them and be a good author for mine loyal readers...

2yr

ArkonKnight
ArkonKnightLv3

Why is a door a door why is a ball a ball why did she leave… well idk just ask the author cause he’s got enough time to write a book on depression 😁anyways I’m not gay so here Is a five star review

1yr
FrancesSupreme
FrancesSupremeLv3

muito bom!!!

2yr
kartik_agarwal
kartik_agarwalLv3

Dropped at ch 85. It is a very cliche story, without anything exciting. the thing I dislike most is - author continously refers the mc klaus as a "nobody'. every chapter's title has nobody in it.. But claus is not a nobody. He was the second strongest in og drama, and his parents and whole family is the strongest in empire. So calling him nobody is a cheap technique to grab reader's attention, and it is disrespectful to other MC's from other stories, who are indeed nobodies in that story, still they can climb up.

1yr
Newbie_165
Newbie_165Lv1

Ooooooohhhh.......................................... Awesome.....,............................. Amazing............................... It's fantastic 😍😍😍😍😍😍

2yr
Shubh_Mittal
Shubh_MittalLv3

Best novel I have read for a long time. Very good and clever use of magic and weapons. Very smooth progression of plot. Very well done and please keep it up.

2yr
moon_pie_99
moon_pie_99Lv4

liked the story. hope the author would continue [img=recommend] .

2yr
Tirth_7846
Tirth_7846Lv3

Author I have recently starting to read this book , currently at chapter 193 , till now superb work done 👍✅ (can I get your insta I'd?) (now stop complaining about reviews 🙂)

1yr
KhunMisaki
KhunMisakiLv13

Im speechless. I felt refreshed on how the author writes his own story, it sounded cliche at first but its surprisingly unique. Grammatical errors are minimal and unnoticeable unless u were og freak. Story development, character design, world background, all I can say is I only see this on a positive light. Definitely something u should read! Dont hesitate coz its blasphemy. I swear its good 👌🏻

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