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Skabold
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2022-07-29 20:16

I can write better than the author, so you can guess how terrible the quality is. + lazy author, first few line and it goes " yeah mc is different than other, why ? because its my book and i can say what I want. (and I have no idea why also" it rly show how much time the author did spend in this story. After this Im almost surprise the MC have a name.

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Painful_truth_
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This guy is hardcore! Extremely merciless! First thing, there is something called sense of humour and second Nobody commented when I wrote it so how do you expect me to know my mistakes? It's my first novel, never written anything in my whole life, I don't consider my novel worthy that's why it's still for free! I'm learning from my mistakes see the latest chapters! You can clearly see aura of legendary author there! Your review hurts so much!!!

tjaredjesthebestbf
tjaredjesthebestbfLv5

where's you're novel and have you written anything?

Skabold
SkaboldLv13

Talking about grammar. Read my comment and read chapter 1. I could be wrong but I feel like I write better. And if we are talking about how to write a story, then no, im not better than the author.

tjaredjesthebestbf:where's you're novel and have you written anything?
Skabold
SkaboldLv13

Yes I am. - we don t have the same sens of humour then. - I can add a few comments, so you can see more clearly what I didn't like. - Don t stop just because of a bad review. Im not able to read your novel, but some might find it great.

Painful_truth_:This guy is hardcore! Extremely merciless! First thing, there is something called sense of humour and second Nobody commented when I wrote it so how do you expect me to know my mistakes? It's my first novel, never written anything in my whole life, I don't consider my novel worthy that's why it's still for free! I'm learning from my mistakes see the latest chapters! You can clearly see aura of legendary author there! Your review hurts so much!!!
tjaredjesthebestbf
tjaredjesthebestbfLv5

I'm just asking cause lately, i found some authors have another account for there novels so i just ask you who knows.

Skabold:Talking about grammar. Read my comment and read chapter 1. I could be wrong but I feel like I write better. And if we are talking about how to write a story, then no, im not better than the author.
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