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2023-02-12 19:11

Dropped at ch 85. It is a very cliche story, without anything exciting. the thing I dislike most is - author continously refers the mc klaus as a "nobody'. every chapter's title has nobody in it.. But claus is not a nobody. He was the second strongest in og drama, and his parents and whole family is the strongest in empire. So calling him nobody is a cheap technique to grab reader's attention, and it is disrespectful to other MC's from other stories, who are indeed nobodies in that story, still they can climb up.

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Thanks for pointing out mistake, and I will revise the previous chapters to remove nobody's part, sorry to disappoint you! Bye 😎👍👋 👋 👋

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