I'm just gonna lay all my grievances here, right now author. Why are non of your FF ever being completed? You start one, leave it unfinished, go to another one, leave it unfinished and repeat it again. Worst of all, they're all about an absurdly Overpowered MC, wish fulfilment and nothing else... I honestly don't even understand why you wrote this book, it aggravating honestly. I'm not saying the FF is stupid, no. I'm saying, if you begin a FF try to finish or leave it in such a way we'll know you'll be back. Not just forsaking it. I don't particularly read your books after reading the one About Raphael. I read it when I want to just find something to make me laugh and that's all. No plot, no reason for existence it's just that. A story. I think I've said some contradictory things so I'm gonna stop here.

I have faith that it will be an "interesting" story(but I still have the idea that he would have been reincarnated as paul, as it would be more interesting and is not used at all in all the ones I have read), always the ones I find are reincarnated as ludeos, being the brother , or an Oc(and the most frustrating thing is that they always want to keep the canon and don't think about following their own path, instead of following what you know like a robot without making a mistake, and then walk all lost when you changed a part and panic that you don't know what will happen xD) It's always better to follow your wishes and give the middle finger to destiny or whatever is written xD.

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I AM DONE WITH THIS AUTHOR'S NOVELS. I WILL NEVER READ ANYTHING OF HIS WORK..THEY HAVE NO PLOT AND ARE LAZY AND DUMB.I AM NOT WASTING MY TIME WITH THIS GUY NOVELS..THEY FAILURE

Deberías actualizar con más frecuencia la historia.________________________________________________________________________ya que es demasiado tiempo llo que hay que esperar para leer un nuevo capítulo.

I came by chance looking for stories that would take away my boredom and with that sypnosis, it seems promising, I hope those who oppose the harem don't come and become haters xD.

I find interesting the beginning with the explanation, I can only say that the hunt begins xD............................................................

I really like the story, there are few Mushoku Tensei fanfics that are interesting and even fewer that have more than 20 chapters but this novel delivers, it doesn't have the best plot, it can be quite cliché and rushed at times but it is very entertaining and once Once you start reading it you don't stop. The only problem I can have is the update of the story, it can take one, two, three weeks or even a month, but I can understand that, the story does not receive the support that the creator would like, but even so it does not stop side. In conclusion, it is a good story, obviously it is not a masterpiece but it does its duty, entertaining the reader, it is a story with chapters (or at least for me) quite short that you can read when you are bored or if you have nothing to do. do, and I promise you that you will not be disappointed. Post: This review was made with the help of a translator so if there are errors I'm sorry, but you know why. :]

like one of the only good story's like this I've found the only thing i dont like is the weird update schedule but thats based on his life so i wont blame him