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Josh_Richie
Josh_RichieLv131yr
2023-04-16 22:55

I'm just gonna lay all my grievances here, right now author. Why are non of your FF ever being completed? You start one, leave it unfinished, go to another one, leave it unfinished and repeat it again. Worst of all, they're all about an absurdly Overpowered MC, wish fulfilment and nothing else... I honestly don't even understand why you wrote this book, it aggravating honestly. I'm not saying the FF is stupid, no. I'm saying, if you begin a FF try to finish or leave it in such a way we'll know you'll be back. Not just forsaking it. I don't particularly read your books after reading the one About Raphael. I read it when I want to just find something to make me laugh and that's all. No plot, no reason for existence it's just that. A story. I think I've said some contradictory things so I'm gonna stop here.

Reborn in Mushoku Tensei with Unique Skill Great Sage

Akros_Zero
4.5
79 Chs

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Akros_Zero
Akros_ZeroAuthor

For your third point, I write what I want to, I am not forcing you to read them or something, you can read them, enjoy and if disappointed then you can leave, everyone has a genre they like and sorry weak Mc's aren't my thing. Even then I have been trying to limit things, maybe it's because of my person bias to weak Mc's of fanfics I have read in the earlier fanfics, but yes you are right I love overpowered Mcs, as for wish fulfillment thing, I have already warned everyone if my any of my fic was gonna be like that. What do you consider a Wish fulfillment fic? Basically anything that fulfills our wishes but this term has been narrowed down to overpowered Mc, having big harem for no reason, and weak plot. I DON'T KNOW IF YOU HAVEN'T READ BUT IF MY FIC IS GONNA BE WISH FULFILLMENT THEN I HAVE WARNED YOU ALL AT THE STARTING. I have done with this fic and one other, my rest of them aren't wish fulfillment. 😔 I know some people might consider others as well but please do consider everyone understands a single thing differently.

1yr
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Akros_Zero
Akros_ZeroAuthor

For your fourth point, I wrote this book because I wanted to, you may hate that I am uploading it too slowly, but I have a life I have to live and unknown struggles to experience. It's just I can't keep writing and wasting my entire free time for nothing please understand.

1yr
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Akros_Zero
Akros_ZeroAuthor

Also if you are angry and have a bad day then you can take it out, better than letting it being pent up, after once said and done make your own decision, I am not going to drop this, even the frequency of update are on your hands, take this to the top and I shall reply to your love with same

1yr
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Josh_Richie
Josh_RichieLv13

Yeah... Ok. I just find the need for harem stupid most at times, so I guess it's my personal bias.

1yr
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Josh_Richie
Josh_RichieLv13

Then focus on one and finish it, then you move into the next. Simple

Akros_Zero:For your fourth point, I wrote this book because I wanted to, you may hate that I am uploading it too slowly, but I have a life I have to live and unknown struggles to experience. It's just I can't keep writing and wasting my entire free time for nothing please understand.
1yr
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Poisoncheaker
PoisoncheakerLv13

Bro, are you going to continue this novel?

Akros_Zero:Also if you are angry and have a bad day then you can take it out, better than letting it being pent up, after once said and done make your own decision, I am not going to drop this, even the frequency of update are on your hands, take this to the top and I shall reply to your love with same
1yr
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Ajay_Nunda_2928
Ajay_Nunda_2928Lv1

I don't think he will most of his ff novel are unfinished

Poisoncheaker:Bro, are you going to continue this novel?
1yr
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Akros_Zero
Akros_ZeroAuthor

Don't know if you are interested in reading this fic, just know that I have uploaded some chapters here

1yr
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GoldenKing_
GoldenKing_Lv14

Just started your books this definitely one of my Favs so far all your books are good wish u would continue this one tho but keep it up man 😁

11mth
Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3

Haha this story is better than your nonsensical story, it's no use having long chapters if it's only exciting in volume 1,

Josh_Richie:Yeah... Ok. I just find the need for harem stupid most at times, so I guess it's my personal bias.
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MasterKai808
MasterKai808Lv12

finished yet

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bananabowling8
bananabowling8Lv4

lol it's fun to watch people argue.

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I have faith that it will be an "interesting" story(but I still have the idea that he would have been reincarnated as paul, as it would be more interesting and is not used at all in all the ones I have read), always the ones I find are reincarnated as ludeos, being the brother , or an Oc(and the most frustrating thing is that they always want to keep the canon and don't think about following their own path, instead of following what you know like a robot without making a mistake, and then walk all lost when you changed a part and panic that you don't know what will happen xD) It's always better to follow your wishes and give the middle finger to destiny or whatever is written xD.

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I AM DONE WITH THIS AUTHOR'S NOVELS. I WILL NEVER READ ANYTHING OF HIS WORK..THEY HAVE NO PLOT AND ARE LAZY AND DUMB.I AM NOT WASTING MY TIME WITH THIS GUY NOVELS..THEY FAILURE

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Hayato_Alexander
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Deberías actualizar con más frecuencia la historia.________________________________________________________________________ya que es demasiado tiempo llo que hay que esperar para leer un nuevo capítulo.

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marianela_arebalo_7450
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I came by chance looking for stories that would take away my boredom and with that sypnosis, it seems promising, I hope those who oppose the harem don't come and become haters xD.

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Daoistx465Sm
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I find interesting the beginning with the explanation, I can only say that the hunt begins xD............................................................

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SAYUTO
SAYUTOLv3

I really like the story, there are few Mushoku Tensei fanfics that are interesting and even fewer that have more than 20 chapters but this novel delivers, it doesn't have the best plot, it can be quite cliché and rushed at times but it is very entertaining and once Once you start reading it you don't stop. The only problem I can have is the update of the story, it can take one, two, three weeks or even a month, but I can understand that, the story does not receive the support that the creator would like, but even so it does not stop side. In conclusion, it is a good story, obviously it is not a masterpiece but it does its duty, entertaining the reader, it is a story with chapters (or at least for me) quite short that you can read when you are bored or if you have nothing to do. do, and I promise you that you will not be disappointed. Post: This review was made with the help of a translator so if there are errors I'm sorry, but you know why. :]

1yr
Brayden_Edmondson_3680
Brayden_Edmondson_3680Lv4

like one of the only good story's like this I've found the only thing i dont like is the weird update schedule but thats based on his life so i wont blame him

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