I'm just gonna lay all my grievances here, right now author. Why are non of your FF ever being completed? You start one, leave it unfinished, go to another one, leave it unfinished and repeat it again. Worst of all, they're all about an absurdly Overpowered MC, wish fulfilment and nothing else... I honestly don't even understand why you wrote this book, it aggravating honestly. I'm not saying the FF is stupid, no. I'm saying, if you begin a FF try to finish or leave it in such a way we'll know you'll be back. Not just forsaking it. I don't particularly read your books after reading the one About Raphael. I read it when I want to just find something to make me laugh and that's all. No plot, no reason for existence it's just that. A story. I think I've said some contradictory things so I'm gonna stop here.

I have faith that it will be an "interesting" story(but I still have the idea that he would have been reincarnated as paul, as it would be more interesting and is not used at all in all the ones I have read), always the ones I find are reincarnated as ludeos, being the brother , or an Oc(and the most frustrating thing is that they always want to keep the canon and don't think about following their own path, instead of following what you know like a robot without making a mistake, and then walk all lost when you changed a part and panic that you don't know what will happen xD) It's always better to follow your wishes and give the middle finger to destiny or whatever is written xD.

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I AM DONE WITH THIS AUTHOR'S NOVELS. I WILL NEVER READ ANYTHING OF HIS WORK..THEY HAVE NO PLOT AND ARE LAZY AND DUMB.I AM NOT WASTING MY TIME WITH THIS GUY NOVELS..THEY FAILURE

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Deberías actualizar con más frecuencia la historia.________________________________________________________________________ya que es demasiado tiempo llo que hay que esperar para leer un nuevo capítulo.

Now this isn't my kind of story, I read it to the end because it's from Mushoku Tensei, but it's pretty bad.

Reading this genuinely lowers my iq I hate this he literally stated that he had to ntr th my at the beginning so that he could become a lusty person and the protag is all like time to bang all the time it’s to the point that he might as well have written a smut novel instead of a fanfic and people would like it more I mean seriously he could have made a smut with a plot similar but not the same as this at least that way people going into it wouldn’t think ohh this is a fanfic but nooo we can’t have nice things in life can we

braindead plot. braindead characters. braindead system. braindead lore. brandead events. braindeas universe. but the smut is hot 😏. for that alone i give it 2 stat.

honestly couldnt read past chapter one. missing letters, atrocious english, random capital letters.... i was completely disappointed since the story had such interesting premises