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Empyrium
EmpyriumLv152yr
2022-05-26 08:02

I like the story, it is something new to see a mother as a mc, hope she will get closer to her daughter again, I like nearly everything, just not Mark(love interest?), I find him annoying and an age difference from 16 years seems big, hope he will just get friendzoned, will see how it will continue, for now I will read more😁

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Empyrium
EmpyriumLv15

yeah thats why I dropped the story, Mark is a nice guy, just dont like him, would have prefered a more mature man yk

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GodKingHuruu
GodKingHuruuLv2

My name totally ins't Mark......I'm not crying, your crying.......

Empyrium
EmpyriumLv15

See, sad that you have to die then😭 But such a good story but I just hate the love interest

GodKingHuruu:My name totally ins't Mark......I'm not crying, your crying.......
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kessu91
kessu91Lv11

Wait to there's some guy the age of her daughter that's the male lead? Seriously? The premise is connecting with her daughter after husbands death(?) and it will be done by getting it on with some teenager?? I wonder how exactly is that going to work? "Oh hi this is your classmate and I'm f*****g him now so lets all be a big family ok?"

Empyrium
EmpyriumLv15

yeah, I liked the story but that with the teen is very annoying for me, for me just mother daughter duo would be great, or at least a love interest in the same age group

kessu91:Wait to there's some guy the age of her daughter that's the male lead? Seriously? The premise is connecting with her daughter after husbands death(?) and it will be done by getting it on with some teenager?? I wonder how exactly is that going to work? "Oh hi this is your classmate and I'm f*****g him now so lets all be a big family ok?"
Demiwizard202
Demiwizard202Lv4

No no no He’s older than the daughter It’s kinda like she’s in her late 30’s and him being like 25. (Not their actual age but a reference for the age gap)

kessu91:Wait to there's some guy the age of her daughter that's the male lead? Seriously? The premise is connecting with her daughter after husbands death(?) and it will be done by getting it on with some teenager?? I wonder how exactly is that going to work? "Oh hi this is your classmate and I'm f*****g him now so lets all be a big family ok?"
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv11

No Yuri? Ewww

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I’ll start my review of this novel by saying outright that Pancakes is my favorite author on webnovel, and I throughly enjoy their novels, so there may be some inherent bias in my review. And everything written below is personal opinion. I have currently read up to chapter 132, and really enjoy this novel as it differs from Pancakes other works like Epic of Caterpillar, DQR, and World Traveling. I really enjoy the balance of slice of life elements that are vital to the understanding of the MC Elayne and the other supporting characters like her daughter Elena, friend Rika and others. Mixed in with the action elements that occur through the VRMMO that is the key element of this story. The main reason that our MC started to play is quite admirable as she wishes to get closer to her daughter after passing of her husband 5 years ago. None of the characters so far feel one dimensional or flat and each adds a unique aspect to the world building and overall story. While some readers may question certain relations between characters I found overall that the characters are very well thought out. The world building in this novel has been developing at a steady pace throughout, both in elements of the “real world” and BNLO VRMMO world. Pancakes has an extremely firm grasp on mythological and fantasy elements as seen throughout their writing and other novels. The hinted possible fusion of the “game” and “reality” hints to more elements to be revealed about the world and universe at large that Pancakes has constructed in their other novels. While having read the other novels provides more insight into these foreshadowing elements it is not require at all in order to understand and enjoy this novel. The pacing of this story may seem slow to those that enjoy quick paced and action packed stories. The slower pace of this novel really fits the characters and the world in my opinion. As I mentioned earlier the slice of life elements and action come together to form in my opinion a cohesive plot line. Pancakes has great update stability, and in my time as a reader of theirs I cannot remember a time that they missed an update ever. In terms of writing quality grammatical errors are few and quite rare, however my own grammatical knowledge isn’t the greatest. Give the novel a try!

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