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Empyrium
EmpyriumLv152yr
2022-05-26 08:02

I like the story, it is something new to see a mother as a mc, hope she will get closer to her daughter again, I like nearly everything, just not Mark(love interest?), I find him annoying and an age difference from 16 years seems big, hope he will just get friendzoned, will see how it will continue, for now I will read more😁

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Empyrium
EmpyriumLv15

yeah thats why I dropped the story, Mark is a nice guy, just dont like him, would have prefered a more mature man yk

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GodKingHuruu
GodKingHuruuLv2

My name totally ins't Mark......I'm not crying, your crying.......

Empyrium
EmpyriumLv15

See, sad that you have to die then😭 But such a good story but I just hate the love interest

GodKingHuruu:My name totally ins't Mark......I'm not crying, your crying.......
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kessu91
kessu91Lv11

Wait to there's some guy the age of her daughter that's the male lead? Seriously? The premise is connecting with her daughter after husbands death(?) and it will be done by getting it on with some teenager?? I wonder how exactly is that going to work? "Oh hi this is your classmate and I'm f*****g him now so lets all be a big family ok?"

Empyrium
EmpyriumLv15

yeah, I liked the story but that with the teen is very annoying for me, for me just mother daughter duo would be great, or at least a love interest in the same age group

kessu91:Wait to there's some guy the age of her daughter that's the male lead? Seriously? The premise is connecting with her daughter after husbands death(?) and it will be done by getting it on with some teenager?? I wonder how exactly is that going to work? "Oh hi this is your classmate and I'm f*****g him now so lets all be a big family ok?"
Demiwizard202
Demiwizard202Lv4

No no no He’s older than the daughter It’s kinda like she’s in her late 30’s and him being like 25. (Not their actual age but a reference for the age gap)

kessu91:Wait to there's some guy the age of her daughter that's the male lead? Seriously? The premise is connecting with her daughter after husbands death(?) and it will be done by getting it on with some teenager?? I wonder how exactly is that going to work? "Oh hi this is your classmate and I'm f*****g him now so lets all be a big family ok?"
Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv11

No Yuri? Ewww

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ottopaybackLv15

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