Item: Twilight of Steel
Rating: 1.8
Author: yokedjaguar

yokedjaguarLv142yr

2022-06-13 04:17

Grammar is atrocious. I don't know if the author can't tell or their lazy. Half the spelling errors could simply be fixed if they re-read what they wrote. The interactions are forced and uncomfortable to read. Kryptonian powers in twilight.... Need I say more.

Twilight of Steel

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VastokingLv5

It only took one day or 2 to get the mc and the girl to fall for each other, which in my books is stupid, I gave a 2+ cus i like the idea of kryptonian, however i dont like such a being in twilight and the change from heat vision to fire breathe was such small brain.

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Hey I am the author of this book reviewing myself.This is my first fanfiction.Story will follow the orginal canon at the beginning with certain changes.Sorry for the grammar mistakes .Please leave a review😁

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my advice is get a beta reader or run it through a writer program. I can't even get into reading because of the poor writing quality. Believe me, I TRIED it felt like I was having a stroke.

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I like it just don’t drop the story and I’ll keep reading ………………….………………….………………….………………….………………….……………….[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Good work man hope u update daily if u can..................................................................................................

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