yokedjaguar

Reeks of chatgpt. The overly detailed descriptions over nothing, bare minimum dialog, regurgitating the same context with different words over and over again. Then, to top it off for 11 chapters straight, it's all about Kael. Chapter 12 is Izuku Midoryia. How did that happen? There was no context. Just Mc is Izuku now with Karl's abilities. It's not the worst I've read, but that's because chatgpt does everything. You could've at least added a bit of creativity to. But no, it's a 4 year old who turns himself into a 20 year old or 30 years every night to fight crime, but he's something more because he can control his muscles. Jesus, it's a bit dramatic.

This is a spar. wtf. He would be kicked from the gym, regardless of talent.

Plot holes, a couple more plot holes, and guess what... it's boring, you thought I was gonna say plot holes. I'll be honest. There isn't any sustenance to the story. It's almost ironic considering the title.

I didn't know it was possible to read a broken record. It's mine, it's rightfully mine, oh it's mine mother's. Jesus, write something else my man. It's what 4 chapters of the same shit

I have never read a book nor a fanfic that has ever given me goosebumps until today. The grammars clean, the story is enriching, the Author has true heartfelt knowledge and an obvious passion about what they're writing. Webnovel is kicking 2025 off hard with a story like this. Well done, Author.

Solid read, not only is the English eligible, but there's correct grammar. Everything fits together like a puzzle. The hook just keeps going. For the first time in a minute, I haven't been bored reading or thinking about reading something else. Honestly, 10/10 read. Plus, the character has a bit of development going on. It's too early to say how far it'll go, though.

The easiest way to spot Chatgpt is how everyone talks. How every piece of dialog is picked apart before the dialog even starts, and then after the dialog has been said, it's picked to the bone, lol.

hmmm, author doesn't know basic law? Self defense isn't a thing anymore? Someone's a little silly, aren't they.

Everything about it feels wrong Especially the grammar. I don't know why, the vibes are just off. Outside of the vibes, learn how to write in English before tackling this or use grammarly at least. Hell chatgpt would've been better than that shit.

Has the Author ever had a conversation? With how dog sh it these conversations have been, I'm assuming you've never even spoken to your parents, much less an acquaintance. Sh it was atrocious.