It only took one day or 2 to get the mc and the girl to fall for each other, which in my books is stupid, I gave a 2+ cus i like the idea of kryptonian, however i dont like such a being in twilight and the change from heat vision to fire breathe was such small brain.

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my advice is get a beta reader or run it through a writer program. I can't even get into reading because of the poor writing quality. Believe me, I TRIED it felt like I was having a stroke.

I like it just don’t drop the story and I’ll keep reading ………………….………………….………………….………………….………………….……………….[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I think it has a lot of potential, keep doing it. I hope you don't drop it cause it's really good for a first fanfic :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

Good work man hope u update daily if u can..................................................................................................

i like the idea of superman but the rest i dont.... and its just too cheesy just like most of twilight fan fics.... ...so a 2 star for me ..

Grammar is atrocious. I don't know if the author can't tell or their lazy. Half the spelling errors could simply be fixed if they re-read what they wrote. The interactions are forced and uncomfortable to read. Kryptonian powers in twilight.... Need I say more.

Great fanfic................. the only problem is that the plot is a bit rushed.