So! Here's my review on what I think is a DC fanfic with a ton of potential and has my mind wanting more to read. Writing Quality: So, quality wise it's good. Only reason I'm giving 3 stars is because of the errors here and there scattered about that break my immersion at times. Also, because as far as I'm aware, the author is English speaking. Even if it is auto correct, I still give 3 stars for not going back to edit the obvious ones. Stability of Updates: This is a new fanfic so not really much to review on, but so far so good. Story Development: It's good. Not original at first, but then again nothing is in fanfics, but has it's own charm and is still in it's developing stages at the moment. There is no clear goal for the MC and I like that. Not saying the author doesn't know what he's doing, but that the story is naturally developing in a way that has me thinking of multiple possibilities that I don't know the end goal. Character Design: I like the MC. I've seen comments hating on him for being a "beta MC" but that's just them reading too many OP fanfics and Wuxia face slapping BS. The MC is no pushover, but he isn't an idiot either. He's a regular guy, in a f****ed up world and is suffering from a disconnection from reality and fiction in a realistic fashion that isn't presented as being a wimpy kid but isn't treated as a nonchalant passing of rushed character development that he gets over quickly and pursues strength. He's a guuy genuinely searching for some meaning in his existence and following the most convenient path for himself until he finds it. World Background: Not much going on, but that's because it's still new. For now, it's enough, but can probably be more descriptive in terms of his (MC) current setting in scenes. Right now, it's more like a description at the start and end of scenes with some breaks in the middle that describe a scene change before going back into dialogue. But still a 5 because the details mentioned in passing are enough for the imagination. Overall: Ton of potential with a unique MC and thought process that I can see him easily become insane or "real" in the eyes of the residents of DC. It's rare seeing this type of personality and thought process being explored in a way that doesn't make it feel like I'm reading a dictionary or scientific report. This feels like a nice, simple fanfic with some spice and not like the other existential crisis MC's in stories that take one chapter to write about nothing but filler, or some that are rushed so much that there is now flow. Short Version: I like it.

The mc doesn’t have the ability to see the future he is so weak This is joke im trying to get a laugh Out of author before he deletes it

its good but oml the MC is driving me insane he hates the system and everything he gets fron it he regards with disgust because it 'isnt real' and its honestly super annoying because hes constantly bitc .hing about it

İ find the mc weak in the mind and also too expressive on his thoughts, it is a good point that he thinks about his existence and all but he is too caught up in it and his basic survival instinct as a human should be to better himself no matter what(i am talking about him not putting his stat points to use for a really long time and despite him coming so close to death)in such a dangerous world, there is also the fact that he does not even consider leaving gotham which in itself is not realistic too i mean it is dangerous so make a quick cash and leave it right?, he is also too emotional and too contemplative, too much awareness in emotions is also not good even though he can't put a finger in what he actually feels for a longt time, the way he thinks seems a little forced to me but the rest is good even though i pointed a lot of stuff that i didn't like your story is so far so much better than what this site offers in a great quantity, i definitely liked it. 4.4

it's a good fanfic but i have to force my self to finish reading a single chap. it make me lose interest in the middle of the chapter or sometimes in the beginning of chapter...basically up and down. do i recommend this fanfic to other? yeah i would. The writing is better than other fanfic...that's all. ps : currently i dont like the mc, bit beta. but hey , character development is there so 👍

Let's just say the author takes some creative liberties to make sure the MC is always the punching bag. either with other characters or even the mcs choices. Some decisions from the MC flat out just nerfs his own chances at things. MC is an adult too, by mind if not body, and yet he behaves like a hormonal teenager. Doesn't match with a cigarette smoking, beaten down by system with no fs to give anymore corpo drone. I say this as someone who has gone through that. At some point u stop caring and become emotionally detached from all the stuff. also thr author might be deleting reviews, it's a sneaking suspicion only though.

Until chapter 115, everything is tolerable until he is stupidly forced to ruin everything. Such a stupid moment, the MC suddenly becomes another stupid character who screams while getting up, attacks without a plan, and the author blames it on the plot

I dropped it because of the MC, I don't like him, but the story is good, of a chance, is to see if you will like the mc.

author you're really torturing the mc,he doesn't even have one happy moment