The English grammar/translation could use quite a bit of improvement, the names are a little strange from a native English speaker’s POV, and the storyline seems to be a little cliché. However, those are my only complaints (or critiques?) and they’re just small things that can be overlooked. Other than that, this comic’s drawing quality is really pretty, and clichés are popular for a reason (they’re entertaining without the stress of wondering too much about what will happen next)! Overall, looking forward to the next chapters and seeing more of the comic’s art!

The translation on this is adorably terrible, but the story itself is quite good. Not remarkable for its genre, but not doing it any shame either. There's some dubcon, so steer clear if that's not your cup of tea, but otherwise enjoy!

I like the redemption arc at the end. Seems like the characters grew.

👏👍it’ a good story short but has a good plot

Beautiful artwork but the translation is inconsistent. For example, mc family name changed from Vills to Wills to Hills within the same episode through all of the first 11. Not going to pay to read anymore.