The English grammar/translation could use quite a bit of improvement, the names are a little strange from a native English speaker’s POV, and the storyline seems to be a little cliché. However, those are my only complaints (or critiques?) and they’re just small things that can be overlooked. Other than that, this comic’s drawing quality is really pretty, and clichés are popular for a reason (they’re entertaining without the stress of wondering too much about what will happen next)! Overall, looking forward to the next chapters and seeing more of the comic’s art!
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