Author another genius work of art, this ff can be compared to jade beauties😍 how do you do it!

So like your last novel, we barely know who the mc was as person. When they reincarnation they get all the memories and emotions but I would like to know who the mc was before he become lucus.what were his goals and passion. It confusing af when u switch from first to third person to a flashback without heading. Do put heading when you r doing that. So far I'm enjoying the novel and am interested to see where it goes.

Enjoyed the story up until now hope you continue to write it in the future once you don’t feel burnt out anymore.[img=recommend][img=recommend]

If had been anything but vampires this would have worked. A crippling weakness and the massive change in diet are all aspects that make it kinda boring. Vampires also are kinda boring as a main character. They never work well.

Good fanfic. I hope you make Thea the female lead, though. It would make sense since he only sees her as a sister from his past self’s memories. You should give him a one night stand with Huntress, though.

“You either die a hero, or live long enough to Morb.” - Mahatma Gandhi 1969.

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It is great. There are parts of this that make my blood rush.