First is writing quality. The writing quality of this novel is honestly not that good. There are many grammar and spelling errors, but the novel is still readable and you can still follow the flow, it's a 3. Stability of updates is a solid 5. The author updates every 2 days about, which is good, and consistent, but could be better. The story development is really slow in the beginning, you really have to get past the first 10 chapters for the pace to finally speed up, so it really was kind of a slug reading through the first 10 chapters. It's a solid 4, because afterwards, the story really picks up and gets good. The character design is okay. To be honest, everything is really generic, there really isn't any uniqueness yet, but that's what you expect from a novel in this genre. So a solid 4, as there are ways to make it unique, but that you just didn't do. Finally is the world background, the best part. There are many unique ideas in the world background, even though the frame was a little cliche. I was really surprised by the uniqueness some of the details brought, different from the generic feeling that the other parts of the story have. Definitely a well thought out world. Overall, a pretty average novel. If the chapters were edited or given a proofread, so that the writing quality was better, and the story development was a little faster, one that hooked the reader in, I would have definitely put this book on my recommended list. It's a good book author, with a good idea and a lot of potential. Continue your hard work!
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