Honestly this novel has a lot of potential, it could be up there in the future with author's pov, But as of now it could get a lot better. Author you should put more weight into your story, for example we never knew how many students are actually attending the academy or how many teachers are teaching what subjects and how the educational system actually works, and for being called the 'best' academy it's a little bit weird how a mere C-rank could become a teacher, considering that they are teaching nobility, you know like... Noble households that are probably filled with S or SS rank members. You could also expand the main cast, I think 3-5 characters is a little bit on the small side but it wouldn't an issue if they get enough character development
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You have good points, but I would like to say that you shan't worry. The reason I don't put enough weight into my story yet is because it might be seen as unneccessary info-dumps, the academy is very vital in the regards to the characters. The number of students and teachers, are unneccessary, but what matters is how many important cast of characters is there. Then you don't need to worry. There will be some information regarding that. That C Rank thingy has an important reason concerning Rio Salem's identity which for obvious reasons have not been explained yet. And the other points like academy system, you see while those information give more detail, in essence, they barely affect anything in the story. It's basically spoonfeeding readers information that will not be of use, however I will try my best to construct a proper system. The history of the world, the schism in the society, the issues between races, and the problem with coorporate capitalism. Those are most likely to going to be introduced later on. Thanks for the review! I'm glad you thought so highly of it, I love Author's PoV but it fell somewhere to me that I dropped it
