Hello, Deathilim here. I'm gonna be shameless as heck but I'm gonna put my review on five stars. Well, that aside this is my first ever written story! I've been interested in The Novel's Extra's concept and planned to make one of my own. Except, this is not plot driven for the most part but character driven. I put more emphasis on the main characters rather than the overall plot, however, there's still plot. Just don't expect it to be grander or over the top amazing! Writing Quality — I know some eenglish here and there, but not a native english speaker. Please pardon my mistakes in writing. Story Development — The start will be neither fast not slow, atleast that is what i envision. I will lay out the important things at the first few ten chapters and then you shan't worry about the pacing. Character Design — Eh, most of my characters are inspired by many different novels. But the main character is an empty vessel, his character at it's core is empty. Updating Stability — I will update atleast 1 chapter a day, if I don't, I will upload 2 chapters next day. World Background — Pretty, uh, mediocre? This is a magical world set in a modern futuristic setting. Earth, of the future has converged all of it's continent forming the “Pangea” or supercontinent. There will be other races too! Well, that's all for the most part! Thank you, please leave a comment and criticize this work of mine.
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Hello, author. Before I start reading, I want to know if this has romance. Some novels I read do not include the tag even tho it is in the story and I just want to know.
It does, but not for the main character. The main character would not enter in any romantic relationship. The only romance in this story is hust between two side characters. Which is already obvious from reading the first ten chapters.
Jacksonville_:Hello, author. Before I start reading, I want to know if this has romance. Some novels I read do not include the tag even tho it is in the story and I just want to know.
Thank you for replying so quickly.
Deathilim_609:It does, but not for the main character. The main character would not enter in any romantic relationship. The only romance in this story is hust between two side characters. Which is already obvious from reading the first ten chapters.image
Does the Mc gonna remain single until the end of the story?
Deathilim_609:It does, but not for the main character. The main character would not enter in any romantic relationship. The only romance in this story is hust between two side characters. Which is already obvious from reading the first ten chapters.image
Truthfully, I haven't planned that far yet.
NObody:Does the Mc gonna remain single until the end of the story?
What is MC gonna do? Teach the main casts? Babysit the maincast? Or work for his own self??
MC wouldn't babysit the main cast, but he will help them in some occassions, not the babysit kind of help btw. The first two arcs in this story will focus on the MC improving himself and gathering a group of allies. The main cast, most of the time, will face their conflicts and problems on their own.
LittleVamp:What is MC gonna do? Teach the main casts? Babysit the maincast? Or work for his own self??
Nice novel, keep up the good work.
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Deathilim_609:It does, but not for the main character. The main character would not enter in any romantic relationship. The only romance in this story is hust between two side characters. Which is already obvious from reading the first ten chapters.image
The MC is an empty vessel? I don’t get it. Does this mean that the Protagonist has no personality? Dear Author, please tell me I am wrong.
searched name on rr couldn't find novel. could you please link.
it's entirely different from novel extra like seriously I didn't notice till read this nevertheless I think a simple connection between them. story is great as it be one of few novel I found worth reading these day also the pace is fast he not joking about but supringly not weird or out of place where they seems natural to be turn of event.i say first but don't hate me, I LIKE ROMANCE any type at least it good so I hope there are no need to be heavy even a slight of it gonna make the story more interesting and balance
Character driven story caught my attention. Tbh if i like characters I am willing to read the worst vomit in the world (i pay attention to plot and word building but characters are the most important for me, it doesnt matter if they are 1, 2 or 3 dimensional, as long as i like them i will read! Okey I am now going to check out ur novel
Basically , The villain wants to live but a downgraded version of that...
Deathilim_609:MC wouldn't babysit the main cast, but he will help them in some occassions, not the babysit kind of help btw. The first two arcs in this story will focus on the MC improving himself and gathering a group of allies. The main cast, most of the time, will face their conflicts and problems on their own.
Sure bud. Think what you want lol.
DarkSama:Basically , The villain wants to live but a downgraded version of that...
i just have to ask. at this point i have read only the synopsis. WHY IS YOUR COVER A GIRL when your main character is presumably a mature man?
is it harem ..i didn't read it
if the mc is not op from the start I'll give it a try
