Having written over 100k+ words, I can tell you that this novel is kinda slow paced. You might feel like things are happening randomly at that point. The pace does go up a bit after around 50 chapters but it's kinda slow before that. Anyways, have fun reading!

This book is awesome just like other books the author has written, the plot is great and the grammar is nice and easy to read......... Not good with words but the book is recommendable. I hope you win the contest and if you don't, please do not drop it due to disappointment or whatever.

I give this the big good award. Writing quality - havent found any grammar mistakes so 5/5 there Story development - i like how the pacing has been til chap 15, not to fast and not too slow. just hope he doesnt skip his childhood years like so many others do. Character design - they're good... it seems like. tho that might change once there are more characters introduced World Background - sort of uniqe? idk it seems familiar but also not, but i dont have anything bad to say about it so its atleast good enough looking forwards to read this book. The only thing i might not like about it is that the system is not universal for everyone, then it feels like way to much of a cheat in my opinion. however i wont drop a good book because of something like that. Gl with your writing author :D

I AM THE EXP OF MY SWORD... EXP IS MY BODY... EXP IS MY BLOOD... I HAVE CREATED OVER 1000 USELESS REVIEWS... UNKNOWN TO LIFE,NOR TO DEATH... I HAVE WITHSTOOD THE PAIN OF CREATING COUNTLESS USELESS REVIEWS... YER THOSE HANDS WILL NEVER WRITE ANYTHING USEFUL... AND SO I PRAY... UNLIMITED EXP WORKS

Have a great world building and amazing characters. I just started this book out of boredom but man this did gave a shock with a very good plot. Till chapter 260 the book has been great and would love to read more. some words to the author 1- if you can then please increase the updates, make them atleast 4-5 per week cause. 2- An advice to not make the harem too big it will really ruin the story as this book have a very high potential. Would love to read more of this book.

This is something I would read any day.The plot looks promising and the system seems a tad bit unique from the normal ones. Furthermore the quality of the chapter is next level, the author makes almost negligible errors making this a fun to read book. Things i expect in the future: Character Development Consistent Updates Consistent Quality of chapter Wish you all the best for the future chapters Author-san

This is, without a doubt, the best novel on this website. This novel is like a lighthouse that stands tall in a sea of endless mediocre works. Its light guides the way for readers like me to know what true art is like. When I read the first chapter, I had to close my phone and just think about life for a moment. That was how much this book impacted me. I had to stop my trembling hand from reaching for my wallet to give my life savings to the author. Despair, joy, defeat, success - this novel captures the essence of the human condition so well it's almost frightening. This book will truly be one of the next greats, remembered and taught in classrooms in the future.

As a person who’s never read a BlackFlamer wn, here’s my review: Writing Quality: absolutely perfect, no grammatical errors. Updating Stability: Great so far, but there’s like no chapters out rn so I won’t comment on that Story Development: Only a few chapters out but pacing’s been perfect Chara Design: Good so far, characters seem more than one-dimensional but there’s not enough chapters to talk about that kek World Background: Not enough chapters for that, but it seems like there’s something, and that something’s pretty good Overall, 4.4 from me

I love this story so much...It is quite outstanding however the fact that when i got to the best part,I have to pay made my currently broke self sad...like none of my fav stories are free however it is understandable considering how good this story is...