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MrDalslaaen
MrDalslaaenLv132yr
2022-05-14 00:34

I give this the big good award. Writing quality - havent found any grammar mistakes so 5/5 there Story development - i like how the pacing has been til chap 15, not to fast and not too slow. just hope he doesnt skip his childhood years like so many others do. Character design - they're good... it seems like. tho that might change once there are more characters introduced World Background - sort of uniqe? idk it seems familiar but also not, but i dont have anything bad to say about it so its atleast good enough looking forwards to read this book. The only thing i might not like about it is that the system is not universal for everyone, then it feels like way to much of a cheat in my opinion. however i wont drop a good book because of something like that. Gl with your writing author :D

Guardian Of The End

BlackFlamer
4.4
275 Chs

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BlackFlamerAuthor

thank for you the review :D

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BlackFlamer
BlackFlamerAuthor

Having written over 100k+ words, I can tell you that this novel is kinda slow paced. You might feel like things are happening randomly at that point. The pace does go up a bit after around 50 chapters but it's kinda slow before that. Anyways, have fun reading!

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Ruby_banks02
Ruby_banks02Lv13

This book is awesome just like other books the author has written, the plot is great and the grammar is nice and easy to read......... Not good with words but the book is recommendable. I hope you win the contest and if you don't, please do not drop it due to disappointment or whatever.

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Kotik_Kotik
Kotik_KotikLv5

up till chapter 40. very good pre reincarnation sequence. very uninspired post reincarnation, boring life boring magic boring Interactions. all of it lacks any spark of ingenuity and feels very generic. i know it probably gets better after a while but i just don't feel like suffering through 100 chapters just for a chance especially since nothing so far has shown any promis. the grammar has been very good for what it's worth at least that's a W

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TheWorthyOne
TheWorthyOneLv14

I AM THE EXP OF MY SWORD... EXP IS MY BODY... EXP IS MY BLOOD... I HAVE CREATED OVER 1000 USELESS REVIEWS... UNKNOWN TO LIFE,NOR TO DEATH... I HAVE WITHSTOOD THE PAIN OF CREATING COUNTLESS USELESS REVIEWS... YER THOSE HANDS WILL NEVER WRITE ANYTHING USEFUL... AND SO I PRAY... UNLIMITED EXP WORKS

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CULPRIT_69
CULPRIT_69Lv4

Have a great world building and amazing characters. I just started this book out of boredom but man this did gave a shock with a very good plot. Till chapter 260 the book has been great and would love to read more. some words to the author 1- if you can then please increase the updates, make them atleast 4-5 per week cause. 2- An advice to not make the harem too big it will really ruin the story as this book have a very high potential. Would love to read more of this book.

2yr
No_No_
No_No_Lv1

This is something I would read any day.The plot looks promising and the system seems a tad bit unique from the normal ones. Furthermore the quality of the chapter is next level, the author makes almost negligible errors making this a fun to read book. Things i expect in the future: Character Development Consistent Updates Consistent Quality of chapter Wish you all the best for the future chapters Author-san

2yr
John_Doever
John_DoeverLv13

This is, without a doubt, the best novel on this website. This novel is like a lighthouse that stands tall in a sea of endless mediocre works. Its light guides the way for readers like me to know what true art is like. When I read the first chapter, I had to close my phone and just think about life for a moment. That was how much this book impacted me. I had to stop my trembling hand from reaching for my wallet to give my life savings to the author. Despair, joy, defeat, success - this novel captures the essence of the human condition so well it's almost frightening. This book will truly be one of the next greats, remembered and taught in classrooms in the future.

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aigotcha
aigotchaLv3

As a person who’s never read a BlackFlamer wn, here’s my review: Writing Quality: absolutely perfect, no grammatical errors. Updating Stability: Great so far, but there’s like no chapters out rn so I won’t comment on that Story Development: Only a few chapters out but pacing’s been perfect Chara Design: Good so far, characters seem more than one-dimensional but there’s not enough chapters to talk about that kek World Background: Not enough chapters for that, but it seems like there’s something, and that something’s pretty good Overall, 4.4 from me

2yr
Miyuria_Chan
Miyuria_ChanLv1

I love this story so much...It is quite outstanding however the fact that when i got to the best part,I have to pay made my currently broke self sad...like none of my fav stories are free however it is understandable considering how good this story is...

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