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2022-05-06 15:51

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Spelloyal
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I'll be honest, the idea is good and the fanfic is interesting, but the author doesn't know how to prioritize. He spent a huge amount of time detailing the MC's 3 years of training and trying to replicate One Piece's Rokushiki, rather than actually progressing the plot. If things continue at this pace, this will be a fanfic with over 1000 chapters, and we all know that it's rare for a fanfic to last that long without being dropped. Another problem is that the Apocalypse started too fast. Modern weapons are still dangerous to most people, and any criminal organization could easily be bombed by the military, the apocalypse should only have started when most people were immune to firearms and the above average could handle missiles, snipers and etc. I would understand the apocalypse if some kind of virus had spread and damaged the government's ability to respond, but in the current situation the military and perhaps the police force should be able to deal with the problem easily. Another thing that doesn't make sense is how the villains seem to be the only ones who've become strong, as they're running wild with no one other than the MC doing anything about it. This is not worm, where people are given powers at traumatic times, which encourages them to use them for evil. In the modern world, with everyone gaining powers, most should be on the side of the heroes, so it really doesn't make sense for society to be destroyed so quickly. Other than there really is nothing to gain by causing chaos like that, most people don't want to conquer or be a tyrant as it's more work than it's worth. I would understand a large number of crimes and robberies, but so many factions rushing to conquer cities and territories like warlords makes no sense.

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