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N0_Hope
N0_HopeLv22yr
2022-05-07 10:57

Up until chapter 31 the story was really good but then we have a pathetic MC with dumb ideas. I just can't stand when an MC behaves like an absolute retard and even accepts garbage in his new " organisation " just for the fun of it... . not even people you trust but murderers that " changed their mind " ..... pathetic.

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Wandering_Swordman
Wandering_SwordmanLv5

What garbage are u talking about ? Mary has good ability it just she need time,she can probably watch their town alone with her ability and gather intelligenc about enemy for free and you're understamating other spiderman ability with cyclops ability,Spider-Man can fight hulk and Cyclops brought Worldbreaker Hulk to his knees

Wandering_Swordman
Wandering_SwordmanLv5

And his clasmate can make healing potion and antidote to poison

Wandering_Swordman
Wandering_SwordmanLv5

Wandering_Swordman
Wandering_SwordmanLv5

Wandering_Swordman
Wandering_SwordmanLv5

Beside they have only take 1 mission they're doing pretty good it's not like mc who trained since birth and have knowledge about the world so he knows what's best choice

95_novel_maniac_95
95_novel_maniac_95Lv5

he is talking about her brother's friends....and him adding random people to his org and telling or giving them info about the anime world or their power also bugs me a lot... I mean if they are trustworthy sure why not but doing so for people that just joined...meh

Wandering_Swordman:What garbage are u talking about ? Mary has good ability it just she need time,she can probably watch their town alone with her ability and gather intelligenc about enemy for free and you're understamating other spiderman ability with cyclops ability,Spider-Man can fight hulk and Cyclops brought Worldbreaker Hulk to his knees
Wandering_Swordman
Wandering_SwordmanLv5

I mean they're loyal to mary brother even though they didn't like his action, so mc giving basic information to gain their trust is not really bad, besides they're not bad probably got B or C in tutorial, he can make them steal the spider that gives peter parker power, super soldier serum, devil fruit or that vial in worm that gives superpower and many more

95_novel_maniac_95:he is talking about her brother's friends....and him adding random people to his org and telling or giving them info about the anime world or their power also bugs me a lot... I mean if they are trustworthy sure why not but doing so for people that just joined...meh
VasH
VasHLv14

You already said it "loyal to Mary's brother" not him. What would happen if that brother of his friend betrayed him then those people would likely follow.

Wandering_Swordman:I mean they're loyal to mary brother even though they didn't like his action, so mc giving basic information to gain their trust is not really bad, besides they're not bad probably got B or C in tutorial, he can make them steal the spider that gives peter parker power, super soldier serum, devil fruit or that vial in worm that gives superpower and many more
Wandering_Swordman
Wandering_SwordmanLv5

Mary brother is in prison though so how can he betray mc? And Mary brother escaping would be difficult when Mary robbed his sense using devil fruit

VasH:You already said it "loyal to Mary's brother" not him. What would happen if that brother of his friend betrayed him then those people would likely follow.
Yunick
YunickLv5

the system is a joke to you??

Wandering_Swordman:Mary brother is in prison though so how can he betray mc? And Mary brother escaping would be difficult when Mary robbed his sense using devil fruit
Wandering_Swordman
Wandering_SwordmanLv5

I doubt Mary brother even has enough coins to buy something that can remove devil fruit powers when he's not that powerful, as for doing missions to gather coins? to complete mission is impossible if he didn't get his sense back so he will probably get killed if he go to something like one piece world

Yunick:the system is a joke to you??
Yunick
YunickLv5

even a girl with a trash memory skill got a broken cheat so it seems pretty easy to me besides the system can heal him, the mc itself got healed for free and there some ways for a senseless person to become strong watch dororo for example hyakkimaru(mc) don´t have any sense, legs or arms or anything. If you are thinking that don´t make any sense... well is anime

Wandering_Swordman:I doubt Mary brother even has enough coins to buy something that can remove devil fruit powers when he's not that powerful, as for doing missions to gather coins? to complete mission is impossible if he didn't get his sense back so he will probably get killed if he go to something like one piece world
Wandering_Swordman
Wandering_SwordmanLv5

Who's girl with trash memory skilk are you talking about? You mean mary right? I mean the world mary got his power was like MHA its depend on luck what superpower you will get, you can get simple telekinesis to ability to jump timeline, i already watch dororo haha even though only 5 or 7 episode since i got bored waiting for new episodes,and the protagonist of that anime was born that way and he's Main characters hahaha, and Mary brother was not genius he's just side character that author created so MC can make Mary join his organization haha welp if Mary brother got comeback as strong villain i will bomb this ff with 1 star, let just wait if system really can heal curse and others power for now I'm gonna just trust author

Yunick:even a girl with a trash memory skill got a broken cheat so it seems pretty easy to me besides the system can heal him, the mc itself got healed for free and there some ways for a senseless person to become strong watch dororo for example hyakkimaru(mc) don´t have any sense, legs or arms or anything. If you are thinking that don´t make any sense... well is anime
Yunick
YunickLv5

well yourself said it he can go to mha world and get an op quirk with pure luck, im just saying there a lot of ways with the system and even without the system still are some ways for example even observation haki solve his problems the mc got the manual and teach OH to the minions if someone has a telepathy skill or some method to teach him he can learn it and probably not having any senses helps to learn it even faster. The author won't do it tho.

Wandering_Swordman:Who's girl with trash memory skilk are you talking about? You mean mary right? I mean the world mary got his power was like MHA its depend on luck what superpower you will get, you can get simple telekinesis to ability to jump timeline, i already watch dororo haha even though only 5 or 7 episode since i got bored waiting for new episodes,and the protagonist of that anime was born that way and he's Main characters hahaha, and Mary brother was not genius he's just side character that author created so MC can make Mary join his organization haha welp if Mary brother got comeback as strong villain i will bomb this ff with 1 star, let just wait if system really can heal curse and others power for now I'm gonna just trust author
Wandering_Swordman
Wandering_SwordmanLv5

I have a lot say but then I remember we dont know how many world they can enter so yeah haha not really impossible to recover, it's not really problem even mary brother got out prison since mc can easily defeat him it just really kinda disappointed if that happen right, and mary brother subordinate didn't know that mary brother planning to attack police station they thought they will just vandalized and other small crime, they didn't like when Mary brother burn the policemen so they must relize that Mary brother become mad because of power so yeah they probably will not follow mary brother, and MC go to fairy tail world got dragon slayer magic and will get to pic other magic type when he complete the mission he will certainly crush other S rank enemy haha

Yunick:well yourself said it he can go to mha world and get an op quirk with pure luck, im just saying there a lot of ways with the system and even without the system still are some ways for example even observation haki solve his problems the mc got the manual and teach OH to the minions if someone has a telepathy skill or some method to teach him he can learn it and probably not having any senses helps to learn it even faster. The author won't do it tho.
Wandering_Swordman
Wandering_SwordmanLv5

Mary brother has only 3 subordinate though and they dont have mind power or something that can teach mary brother haki and awakening haki takes years so yeah let just say Mary brother was super talented about haki and learn observation haki in 1 year, In 1 year the nation will get more superpower so they will probably create special prison to deal with superhuman and beside can he practice in prison haha? And why would those 3 save Mary brother when they already know he's already mad because of power (as i said in my last reply they dont know Mary brother planning to attack police station if not they will agree because there are high chances they will die

Yunick:well yourself said it he can go to mha world and get an op quirk with pure luck, im just saying there a lot of ways with the system and even without the system still are some ways for example even observation haki solve his problems the mc got the manual and teach OH to the minions if someone has a telepathy skill or some method to teach him he can learn it and probably not having any senses helps to learn it even faster. The author won't do it tho.
Skaar
SkaarLv4

Besides, all the assassins are already Dead as cannon fodder.

Yunick
YunickLv5

Whatever seems like you are a very narrow minded person

Wandering_Swordman:Mary brother has only 3 subordinate though and they dont have mind power or something that can teach mary brother haki and awakening haki takes years so yeah let just say Mary brother was super talented about haki and learn observation haki in 1 year, In 1 year the nation will get more superpower so they will probably create special prison to deal with superhuman and beside can he practice in prison haha? And why would those 3 save Mary brother when they already know he's already mad because of power (as i said in my last reply they dont know Mary brother planning to attack police station if not they will agree because there are high chances they will die
Wandering_Swordman
Wandering_SwordmanLv5

Bruh just admit your learning haki makes no sense, and all i say fact though?you're the one narror minded hahaha

Yunick:Whatever seems like you are a very narrow minded person
Wandering_Swordman
Wandering_SwordmanLv5

Wow even side character was more talented than luffy in haki hahaha

Yunick:well yourself said it he can go to mha world and get an op quirk with pure luck, im just saying there a lot of ways with the system and even without the system still are some ways for example even observation haki solve his problems the mc got the manual and teach OH to the minions if someone has a telepathy skill or some method to teach him he can learn it and probably not having any senses helps to learn it even faster. The author won't do it tho.
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Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv12

I'll be honest, the idea is good and the fanfic is interesting, but the author doesn't know how to prioritize. He spent a huge amount of time detailing the MC's 3 years of training and trying to replicate One Piece's Rokushiki, rather than actually progressing the plot. If things continue at this pace, this will be a fanfic with over 1000 chapters, and we all know that it's rare for a fanfic to last that long without being dropped. Another problem is that the Apocalypse started too fast. Modern weapons are still dangerous to most people, and any criminal organization could easily be bombed by the military, the apocalypse should only have started when most people were immune to firearms and the above average could handle missiles, snipers and etc. I would understand the apocalypse if some kind of virus had spread and damaged the government's ability to respond, but in the current situation the military and perhaps the police force should be able to deal with the problem easily. Another thing that doesn't make sense is how the villains seem to be the only ones who've become strong, as they're running wild with no one other than the MC doing anything about it. This is not worm, where people are given powers at traumatic times, which encourages them to use them for evil. In the modern world, with everyone gaining powers, most should be on the side of the heroes, so it really doesn't make sense for society to be destroyed so quickly. Other than there really is nothing to gain by causing chaos like that, most people don't want to conquer or be a tyrant as it's more work than it's worth. I would understand a large number of crimes and robberies, but so many factions rushing to conquer cities and territories like warlords makes no sense.

FrostKing5678
FrostKing5678Lv13
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