I'll be honest, the idea is good and the fanfic is interesting, but the author doesn't know how to prioritize. He spent a huge amount of time detailing the MC's 3 years of training and trying to replicate One Piece's Rokushiki, rather than actually progressing the plot. If things continue at this pace, this will be a fanfic with over 1000 chapters, and we all know that it's rare for a fanfic to last that long without being dropped. Another problem is that the Apocalypse started too fast. Modern weapons are still dangerous to most people, and any criminal organization could easily be bombed by the military, the apocalypse should only have started when most people were immune to firearms and the above average could handle missiles, snipers and etc. I would understand the apocalypse if some kind of virus had spread and damaged the government's ability to respond, but in the current situation the military and perhaps the police force should be able to deal with the problem easily. Another thing that doesn't make sense is how the villains seem to be the only ones who've become strong, as they're running wild with no one other than the MC doing anything about it. This is not worm, where people are given powers at traumatic times, which encourages them to use them for evil. In the modern world, with everyone gaining powers, most should be on the side of the heroes, so it really doesn't make sense for society to be destroyed so quickly. Other than there really is nothing to gain by causing chaos like that, most people don't want to conquer or be a tyrant as it's more work than it's worth. I would understand a large number of crimes and robberies, but so many factions rushing to conquer cities and territories like warlords makes no sense.

Up until chapter 31 the story was really good but then we have a pathetic MC with dumb ideas. I just can't stand when an MC behaves like an absolute retard and even accepts garbage in his new " organisation " just for the fun of it... . not even people you trust but murderers that " changed their mind " ..... pathetic.

Interesting. Writing quality is good, and the concept is unique. Plus, atleast the MC has some common sense. Renewal Taekwondo ftw. Also, he atleast trains regularly, which is a plus side.

I like the idea of ​​the story but I think this story goes the same way as many Chinese stories with similar ideas of a person from our world dying and going to another world where people can go to other worlds that in our world are fiction and only the protagonist of the story knows these worlds I find this story very interesting but it almost always happens from the protagonist is ridiculously OP honestly this makes the story very dull and the MC of this story is strong but he still can't be considered OP but as the story is just at the beginning he Being strong already removes the possibility of him going to some worlds that even not being dangerous or having strong characters have interesting powers, abilities or equipment simply because the MC There will be no need to use this kind of thing because it wouldn't be very useful for him honestly I think it would be much more interesting if the MC had to start from weaker worlds and starts Evolving from what he just starts in a world like one piece where almost all powers are very strong i really hope i'm wrong as i like these types of stories

very good and unique idee,the training arc is good written, but the story afterwards is just plain stupid,he makes a organization with very weak people which after about 2 seconds are his best friends and then he makes pretty stupid mistakes that where covered in his training so he seems just plain stupid

great story so far... I don't know if this is the original or a copy version but this is amazing... I like the concept of the multiversal system and how the story has progressed.... there are some grammatical inaccuracies and information mismatches here and there but overall it is good... I hope that you will publish more and more chapters quickly as I am eager to read them.

I have t read this yet, it depends on wether only he knows about the mangas/worlds or everyone else to knows the stories❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓❓

I noticed the author of this work using power stone to push my own story a few times. After checking him out I came across this masterpiece! The idea of this Fic is similar to my own and I really like it. It's so much fun to read and I have to hold myself back not to try to let it influence my own story! I'll try to drown the knowledge with a lot of alcohol. It's really a shame you stopped working on it. If you have any kind of advise for me please tell me. I really enjoyed this story. Easy 5 / 5

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