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Mael_Scarp
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2022-05-13 19:42

first of all he doesn't have an advantage because his memories only come when he gets hit in the head, second then there is no need for him to introduce firearms, although there are hopes of cannons or grenades and the like, third, first we it shows a brave and strategic young general, but then it shows us a weak general, incompetent and I don't understand the last thing, if his soldiers have armor, experience, he can finish him off but he decides to be a hostage, pathetic. Although I know what you want to get with the problems you face although it is good but it does not fit much.

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You Don't understand , the men were Only 5 hundred and the bsrbarians 1000 at least , thsn his men Just Lost and they were demoliresed , even more they were forced ti March , now tell me of you were a soldier After bring defeated marchese for 12 hours and was asked ti fight an arny twice their side so that his general could protect his slave , Who were considered object , would you have fight ? No probably they would have mutinied

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