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AbdullahTron
AbdullahTronLv42yr
2022-09-19 07:34

Trash novel. Tyranny of Steel was somewhat of a better novel. But here the MC is just plain stupid. Despite calling himself the greatest General, he has the smarts of a 3-year-old kid with a brain the size of a pea. He can't even blatantly see how others treat his slave. Serving an incompetent Emperor, and he justifies it with being loyal to the country. If he was loyal to the country and its people, the first this he would do would be to kill that Emperor. He does so much for the country and then gets flogged through the streets naked. And still remains loyal. Lol sure. Instead of being realistic and practical, Go live in your wish fulfillment, would be believed world Author

Heir of Aurelian

Zentmeister
4.3
181 Chs

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Vlas_Orel
Vlas_OrelLv1

The MC was flogged naked and taken out into the street, and then he continued to serve the emperor, the author did such garbage and they read this further? I just wanted to start reading and see your comment

2yr
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AbdullahTron
AbdullahTronLv4

Yea, that happened and after reading that I dropped the novel. To me this makes no sense. The MC should atleast have some dignity

Vlas_Orel:The MC was flogged naked and taken out into the street, and then he continued to serve the emperor, the author did such garbage and they read this further? I just wanted to start reading and see your comment
1yr
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POIX
POIXLv4

You forgot about arguably the Greatest Admiral in History Admiral Yi who was humiliated and demoted time and time again, but still fought on for his country basically single handily saving his country from getting conquered by Japan. But yea I agree with you on the MC being stupid he could just kill the emperor and proclaim himself the Emperor.

1yr
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This has been a long time coming can't wait to see what Zent does with this novel after all ToS was great and with the year extra experience under his belt Zent will be able to do a lot better with this one. Still ToS is amazing as well. Anyway I know this is going to be a good one (that will also hurt my coin pouch)

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Trust me when it comes to this author no novel he writes can be bad I enjoy his two other novels so I’ll gladly try out this one! Can’t wait to dive into this new read.

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JRZTT1246
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I read up till ch.18 but nothing of interest happened. MC got a memory of the future but had done nothing about it. He's still the same man so to call this transmigration or reincarnation is not entirely correct in my opinion. I thought even if it's just memory, he'd use that to his advantage, but nothing of the source at all. I will continue to see further but if MC didn't take advantage of what he has, then I don't see the point of continuing with this story. Came here for a future knowledge kingdom-building story, and till now, nothing happen most of the early chapters can be skipped and you hardly miss a thing.

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Febfew
FebfewLv11

The story had enormous potential, but it was destroyed. From chapter 1~17, 12 chapters are 100% disposable. The main character should reincarnate facing the numerous difficulties, including psychological problems of being trapped in a newborn's body until adolescence, and show the enormous advantages and disadvantages of that time, until the beginning of the military campaigns. I expected a lot from this story, but it's a waste of time.

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DetectiveHarem
DetectiveHaremLv14

will there be a harem here I hope so[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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XLucifer_AceX
XLucifer_AceXLv1

I hope you don't make the same mistake of the tryanny of steel and introduce the guns to fast and focus on cold weapons and infrastructure also it would be nice to see more kingdom building instead of war and also hope you introduce heram as its fairly common for powerful men to have them and it died after Christianity took over and to all the people who complain about the girls falling for the mc easily in tryanny of steel are stupid first he is the mc second he is handsome third he is rich and powerful and in old days where daughters wear wed to just gain some profit and have to say in whatsoever its not hard to imagine why they fell for him being liberal and all the above reason so they are just stupid I hope you add heram in this also hope this novel also has the mc writing books on philosophy and what not as he lived in the future and describe how thing might be in future English is not my native tongue sorry

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Alzeron
AlzeronLv13

I've been waiting for a good novel about ancient Rome for years, now I see that Zentmeister has created one and I have no doubt that it will be incredible.

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ciroxzx
ciroxzxLv11

Honestly, I'm only writing a review to find out if the author is going to continue it, I never felt that a novel in Webnovel was worth paying for until this one, I like kingdom building and this one does it very well, things are well studied. I like that it is not a reincarnation or a normal transmigration, the mc receives memories through dreams, but he feels Roman, for those who complain that he is stupid, that is honestly the reason why I gave him a 5 star in construction character, normally in Webnovel they are usually made into perfect gentlemen from the beginning, but they are just characters, they don't feel human. It's a shame that he ended up in the fight for Persia.

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