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Lotion_99Lv12yr
2022-07-29 20:02

So people in the reviews are saying that they dont have a clue abt whats going on and i can relate to that ever since the second chapter. Its just very confusing. The story feels all over the place and its just too much. I thought maybe i just wasnt paying attention but thats not the case bc of the other reviews i saw. The story doesnt look bad its just written a bit poorly.

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Hot_QueenWriterLv1

Don't be vague and help me out here... What's so confusing about the story except the history of mutants and deviants?

Kw0zLv14

You’re 100% the author on another account. It’s either that, or you’re a massive meat rider.

Hot_QueenWriter:Don't be vague and help me out here... What's so confusing about the story except the history of mutants and deviants?
Hot_QueenWriterLv1

I'm his sister you buffoon...

Kw0z:You’re 100% the author on another account. It’s either that, or you’re a massive meat rider.
Helen_MaximmillianLv1

Author caught using family members webnovel acc

Kw0zLv14

Sure you are

Hot_QueenWriter:I'm his sister you buffoon...
DMC_MAXAuthor

Instead of reading the book you all are talking about accounts

DMC_MAXAuthor

🙄 Just read the book

Helen_Maximmillian:Author caught using family members webnovel acc
DMC_MAXAuthor

...

Hot_QueenWriter:I'm his sister you buffoon...
DMC_MAXAuthor

.....

Hot_QueenWriter:Don't be vague and help me out here... What's so confusing about the story except the history of mutants and deviants?
DMC_MAXAuthor

"Kek"

Kw0z:You’re 100% the author on another account. It’s either that, or you’re a massive meat rider.
Kw0zLv14

Kekekeke

DMC_MAX:"Kek"
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VanaxityLv1

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