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DMC_MAX
DMC_MAXAuthor2yr
2022-05-01 13:04

Author again! Here to release another amazing review for my newest work. Okie readers, this book is a book in a science world with fantasy elements! What do I mean? Have you ever had a thought that strange supernatural forces are always hiding in the darkness masked by the reign of technology? Our MC is a supervillain with a system that helps him cheat the order of the gods above. He is an anti-hero who doesn't risk his life without a reason. The story is set in an apocalyptic world where they're Superheroes (Deviants), Supervillains (Mutants), and scarily intelligent zombies (Variants). They'll be steady character growth from weak and naive to cunning and strong. This book has romance but no harem. Support is always welcome including your gifts, tickets, and power stones! Chapter Release Rate: 14 Chapter/Week +Bonus Chapters For Fulfilling Author Goals! Well, time for you to read the book, and see for yourself how amazing it could be.

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Game_Lord222
Game_Lord222Lv1

Don't drop it... I love this one

Crazy_DarkSide_Cat
Crazy_DarkSide_CatLv10

Dropped?

DMC_MAX
DMC_MAXAuthor

Never

Crazy_DarkSide_Cat:Dropped?
tortle
tortleLv3

why so less updates author ?

DMC_MAX:Never
DMC_MAX
DMC_MAXAuthor

personal issues

tortle:why so less updates author ?
Jacob_Hobbs_7913
Jacob_Hobbs_7913Lv4

Hope they are resolved

DMC_MAX:personal issues
DMC_MAX
DMC_MAXAuthor

They are now

Jacob_Hobbs_7913:Hope they are resolved
DragonGodOfIce
DragonGodOfIceLv3

who is the love interest I don't mind spoiling it for me

DMC_MAX:They are now
DMC_MAX
DMC_MAXAuthor

T

DragonGodOfIce:who is the love interest I don't mind spoiling it for me
Heratles
HeratlesLv13

Harem?

Tommyshelby
TommyshelbyLv13

Author is these harem

DMC_MAX:personal issues
DMC_MAX
DMC_MAXAuthor

No

Tommyshelby:Author is these harem
Sonu_Siraj
Sonu_SirajLv14

polygamy or monogamy??

DMC_MAX
DMC_MAXAuthor

😂 No harem

Sonu_Siraj:polygamy or monogamy??
Johnathon_Magus
Johnathon_MagusLv3

The Girl on the cover the love interest or just click bait material lol.

DMC_MAX
DMC_MAXAuthor

😒😒

Johnathon_Magus:The Girl on the cover the love interest or just click bait material lol.
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Johnathon_Magus
Johnathon_MagusLv3

My guy you salty? You put the cover up there that’s on you. I‘m just pointing it out pic’s nature as click baitey no harm or foul.

DMC_MAX:😒😒
eveolution94
eveolution94Lv15

all latest chapters are repeats waste of stones. the book is great and all but the repeat chapters make me think you hade a stroke while uploading.

eveolution94
eveolution94Lv15

that said. im still gonna keep reading.

eveolution94:all latest chapters are repeats waste of stones. the book is great and all but the repeat chapters make me think you hade a stroke while uploading.
DMC_MAX
DMC_MAXAuthor

Sorry, I'll try my best to fix them soon 😔

eveolution94:all latest chapters are repeats waste of stones. the book is great and all but the repeat chapters make me think you hade a stroke while uploading.
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