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DMC_MAXAuthor2yr
2022-05-01 05:04

Author again! Here to release another amazing review for my newest work. Okie readers, this book is a book in a science world with fantasy elements! What do I mean? Have you ever had a thought that strange supernatural forces are always hiding in the darkness masked by the reign of technology? Our MC is a supervillain with a system that helps him cheat the order of the gods above. He is an anti-hero who doesn't risk his life without a reason. The story is set in an apocalyptic world where they're Superheroes (Deviants), Supervillains (Mutants), and scarily intelligent zombies (Variants). They'll be steady character growth from weak and naive to cunning and strong. This book has romance but no harem. Support is always welcome including your gifts, tickets, and power stones! Chapter Release Rate: 14 Chapter/Week +Bonus Chapters For Fulfilling Author Goals! Well, time for you to read the book, and see for yourself how amazing it could be.

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Game_Lord222Lv1

Don't drop it... I love this one

Crazy_DarkSide_CatLv11

Dropped?

DMC_MAXAuthor

Never

Crazy_DarkSide_Cat:Dropped?
tortleLv3

why so less updates author ?

DMC_MAX:Never
DMC_MAXAuthor

personal issues

tortle:why so less updates author ?
Jacob_Hobbs_7913Lv4

Hope they are resolved

DMC_MAX:personal issues
DMC_MAXAuthor

They are now

Jacob_Hobbs_7913:Hope they are resolved
DragonGodOfIceLv3

who is the love interest I don't mind spoiling it for me

DMC_MAX:They are now
DMC_MAXAuthor

T

DragonGodOfIce:who is the love interest I don't mind spoiling it for me
HeratlesLv13

Harem?

TommyshelbyLv14

Author is these harem

DMC_MAX:personal issues
DMC_MAXAuthor

No

Tommyshelby:Author is these harem
Sonu_SirajLv14

polygamy or monogamy??

DMC_MAXAuthor

😂 No harem

Sonu_Siraj:polygamy or monogamy??
Johnathon_MagusLv3

The Girl on the cover the love interest or just click bait material lol.

DMC_MAXAuthor

😒😒

Johnathon_Magus:The Girl on the cover the love interest or just click bait material lol.
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Johnathon_MagusLv3

My guy you salty? You put the cover up there that’s on you. I‘m just pointing it out pic’s nature as click baitey no harm or foul.

DMC_MAX:😒😒
eveolution94Lv15

all latest chapters are repeats waste of stones. the book is great and all but the repeat chapters make me think you hade a stroke while uploading.

eveolution94Lv15

that said. im still gonna keep reading.

eveolution94:all latest chapters are repeats waste of stones. the book is great and all but the repeat chapters make me think you hade a stroke while uploading.
DMC_MAXAuthor

Sorry, I'll try my best to fix them soon 😔

eveolution94:all latest chapters are repeats waste of stones. the book is great and all but the repeat chapters make me think you hade a stroke while uploading.
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I Have a Cheat System in the Apocalypse is a story about Felix, who has a system (I think), trying to do something? Admittedly, chapter six isn't a good point to give a objective review on a novel, however the first six chapters are so bad I cannot continue reading this. First off, the writing quality. This whole novel reads like you were hit by a truck and are now attempting to recall what happened while under anesthesia. Nothing at all makes sense in this novel. The first six chapters are so badly written that you will only be able to pick up some very superficial information. Mutants are being hunted by humans. Mutants have a school. The main character *might* have a system. That's really all I gleaned. (1/5 stars) Moving onto story development. It's awful. This might have to do with the way this story was written, but very little makes sense. I was planning on giving a general rundown of the first six chapters but I can't be asked to make sense of that convoluted mess. Anywho, the pacing is absolutely insane, main character is randomly thrown into combat multiple times, each reason he starts combat is increasingly more stupid than the last. After the main character nearly gets assassinated, but narrowly wins, a intelligent gorilla attacks them. The main character saves his assassin (thats right), and kills the gorilla. Promptly following, he falls over and dies. After this, we are suddenly thrown into a MMORPG, because why not. I could continue rambling on about various inconsistencies and plot holes that are in the first six chapters, but all you need to know is that almost every single character, idea, place, setting, that is introduced doesn't make sense. (1/5 stars) Character design. I don't really know all that much, main character has a weird obsession with money, has a close friend, that's about it. Characters are also convoluted and the main character seems like he has some form of autism, so I'm just going to default this to two stars. (2/5 stars) World background is a mess. So, from what vague inferences I can make, this is a apocalyptic world, where humanity is being attacked by various mutant beasts. So, in spite of this, the government decides to hunt down and kill humans with abilities? Anyway, school the main character has a super-powerful mutant in charge, but all it takes to pressure him is a mech and like ten police officers. Well, author only spent about five chapters in the real world before the main character dies and goes into a MMORPG world, so whatever. (1/5 stars) Overall, this is a very bad novel, but in a new way. I haven't seen as many novels that are as convoluted as this. Writing quality is very bad, and causes a lot of confusion right off the bat. The story development and world background don't help this either, making reading this even more confusing. I would recommend the author to use a story board and plan ahead, and at the very least fixing the abhorrent pacing issues. I give this novel 2.0 stars out of 5.

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