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2022-04-29 23:25

Phenomenal start to what I except is going to be a wonderful addition to this site! The premise is intriguing and I can't wait for the new updates!!!

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Isaac_black
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thank you so much , i will do my best

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Isaac_black
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Hi author here, after I hit the 100 chapter I told you guys that I was going to make a new review to answer the questions that I got in the past chapters and to clarify the things you mentioned or asked about . First, the MC 's character: It is really too early to judge his character. Reading some comments that I got made me think sometimes that some of you don’t even understand the concept of trauma and its repercussions on one's life let alone a kid's life . We are talking about a kid who saw his parents do some despicable things all his life( sacrificing animals, suspicions of murdering his aunt, and sacrificing him in a cult). Literally, all this is mentioned in the first 4 chapters, so don’t worry about spoilers , of course, he will not act as he should be . Second: The editing part, I went through all the past chapters, and now I am in chapter 40, so don't worry I will keep uploading the chapters and editing at the same time . third: Romance / Harem : I prefer to not answer that question because we are still in early chapters and I really can’t say if there is or not because that might make some readers leave reading or not read at all, all you need to know is that the mc is going to grow slowly to be stronger, smarter, more intelligent. Anti-hero: Well aren’t we all in love with anti-hero characters? Pace: warning : don’t expect the mc to turn evil in the first chapters. Last: well, I recommend reading until chapter 46 and judging it . If you guys have any questions, remarks, ideas, or complaints, write them down in this review . and yeah without your support guys this work was going to be buried under my pillow, so thank you for giving me a chance to bring it to life .

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Redfar
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Ayant actuellement lu jusqu'au chapitre 28 je poste un avis sur cette histoire. Le MC est toujours entrain de s'apitoyer sur son sort, ne fait rien pour arranger sa situation. Bref, je vais pas mentir je perd de plus en plus l'intérêt de lire cette histoire, regarder une personne refaire les mêmes erreurs encore et encore sans essayer de changer quelque chose me fait perdre l'envie de lire. Pareil, la professeure qui est supposé avoir tout fait pour l'aider depuis le début... Auteur avait vous enlever les chapitres où elle l'a aider ? Parce qu'actuellement il n'y a aucun moment où elle l'a aider, elle n'a fait que lui répéter de contrôler ces émotions pour ne pas répondre au provocation de Samael. Au passage, pourquoi vous avez écrit à plusieurs reprise que le MC était doué pour cacher/contrôler ces émotions alors que legit à chaque fois que quelqu'un lui parle soit il s'énerve soit il devient apeuré. Bref, tout ça pour dire que je m'arrête ici de lire pour cette histoire, je ne vois pour l'instant pas d'intérêt à continuer. Je reviendrais peut être dans quelque temps pour le continuer mais pour l'instant j'en ai perdu l'envie. Je vous invite quand même à lire cette histoire pour vous faire votre propre avis car même si j'ai perdu l'envie de continuer à lire plus loin que le chapitre 28 peut être que de votre côté vous trouverez votre bonheur dans cette histoire car il n'en reste pas moins que la qualité d'écriture est très correct, la stabilité de mise à jour des chapitres est plutôt ok aussi, le fond du monde à l'air assez intéressant et à pas mal de potentiel. Par contre, comme vous l'avez lu plus haut dans mon commentaire, de mon point de vue je trouve que le développement de l'histoire et la conception des personnages n'est vraiment pas terrible. Je terminé donc ici mon avis, bien entendu mon avis n'engage que moi à vous de vous faire votre propre avis sur cette histoire.

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