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2022-09-03 03:16

No hate author world building is good but story pace is slow. They r not my type, love to see your other creation with little better story pace 😉😉

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Isaac_black
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thank you so much for kind words.

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Isaac_black
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Hi author here, after I hit the 100 chapter I told you guys that I was going to make a new review to answer the questions that I got in the past chapters and to clarify the things you mentioned or asked about . First, the MC 's character: It is really too early to judge his character. Reading some comments that I got made me think sometimes that some of you don’t even understand the concept of trauma and its repercussions on one's life let alone a kid's life . We are talking about a kid who saw his parents do some despicable things all his life( sacrificing animals, suspicions of murdering his aunt, and sacrificing him in a cult). Literally, all this is mentioned in the first 4 chapters, so don’t worry about spoilers , of course, he will not act as he should be . Second: The editing part, I went through all the past chapters, and now I am in chapter 40, so don't worry I will keep uploading the chapters and editing at the same time . third: Romance / Harem : I prefer to not answer that question because we are still in early chapters and I really can’t say if there is or not because that might make some readers leave reading or not read at all, all you need to know is that the mc is going to grow slowly to be stronger, smarter, more intelligent. Anti-hero: Well aren’t we all in love with anti-hero characters? Pace: warning : don’t expect the mc to turn evil in the first chapters. Last: well, I recommend reading until chapter 46 and judging it . If you guys have any questions, remarks, ideas, or complaints, write them down in this review . and yeah without your support guys this work was going to be buried under my pillow, so thank you for giving me a chance to bring it to life .

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Redfar
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Ayant actuellement lu jusqu'au chapitre 28 je poste un avis sur cette histoire. Le MC est toujours entrain de s'apitoyer sur son sort, ne fait rien pour arranger sa situation. Bref, je vais pas mentir je perd de plus en plus l'intĂ©rĂȘt de lire cette histoire, regarder une personne refaire les mĂȘmes erreurs encore et encore sans essayer de changer quelque chose me fait perdre l'envie de lire. Pareil, la professeure qui est supposĂ© avoir tout fait pour l'aider depuis le dĂ©but... Auteur avait vous enlever les chapitres oĂč elle l'a aider ? Parce qu'actuellement il n'y a aucun moment oĂč elle l'a aider, elle n'a fait que lui rĂ©pĂ©ter de contrĂŽler ces Ă©motions pour ne pas rĂ©pondre au provocation de Samael. Au passage, pourquoi vous avez Ă©crit Ă  plusieurs reprise que le MC Ă©tait douĂ© pour cacher/contrĂŽler ces Ă©motions alors que legit Ă  chaque fois que quelqu'un lui parle soit il s'Ă©nerve soit il devient apeurĂ©. Bref, tout ça pour dire que je m'arrĂȘte ici de lire pour cette histoire, je ne vois pour l'instant pas d'intĂ©rĂȘt Ă  continuer. Je reviendrais peut ĂȘtre dans quelque temps pour le continuer mais pour l'instant j'en ai perdu l'envie. Je vous invite quand mĂȘme Ă  lire cette histoire pour vous faire votre propre avis car mĂȘme si j'ai perdu l'envie de continuer Ă  lire plus loin que le chapitre 28 peut ĂȘtre que de votre cĂŽtĂ© vous trouverez votre bonheur dans cette histoire car il n'en reste pas moins que la qualitĂ© d'Ă©criture est trĂšs correct, la stabilitĂ© de mise Ă  jour des chapitres est plutĂŽt ok aussi, le fond du monde Ă  l'air assez intĂ©ressant et Ă  pas mal de potentiel. Par contre, comme vous l'avez lu plus haut dans mon commentaire, de mon point de vue je trouve que le dĂ©veloppement de l'histoire et la conception des personnages n'est vraiment pas terrible. Je terminĂ© donc ici mon avis, bien entendu mon avis n'engage que moi Ă  vous de vous faire votre propre avis sur cette histoire.

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