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Isaac_black
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2022-08-04 00:13

Hi author here, after I hit the 100 chapter I told you guys that I was going to make a new review to answer the questions that I got in the past chapters and to clarify the things you mentioned or asked about . First, the MC 's character: It is really too early to judge his character. Reading some comments that I got made me think sometimes that some of you don’t even understand the concept of trauma and its repercussions on one's life let alone a kid's life . We are talking about a kid who saw his parents do some despicable things all his life( sacrificing animals, suspicions of murdering his aunt, and sacrificing him in a cult). Literally, all this is mentioned in the first 4 chapters, so don’t worry about spoilers , of course, he will not act as he should be . Second: The editing part, I went through all the past chapters, and now I am in chapter 40, so don't worry I will keep uploading the chapters and editing at the same time . third: Romance / Harem : I prefer to not answer that question because we are still in early chapters and I really can’t say if there is or not because that might make some readers leave reading or not read at all, all you need to know is that the mc is going to grow slowly to be stronger, smarter, more intelligent. Anti-hero: Well aren’t we all in love with anti-hero characters? Pace: warning : don’t expect the mc to turn evil in the first chapters. Last: well, I recommend reading until chapter 46 and judging it . If you guys have any questions, remarks, ideas, or complaints, write them down in this review . and yeah without your support guys this work was going to be buried under my pillow, so thank you for giving me a chance to bring it to life .

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CrimsonPhoenix
CrimsonPhoenixLv13

hope u know not answer the question of romance will also make people leave

Isaac_black
Isaac_blackAuthor

hey there, what is your question?

CrimsonPhoenix:hope u know not answer the question of romance will also make people leave
Yuki_55
Yuki_55Lv14

His asking if this is a harem or not. If it turns out to be harem, non harem readers will leave. if it’s non harem, harem readers will be spamming comments, demanding harem… You lose eaither way… (well, not really, since you get viewers both ways)

Isaac_black:hey there, what is your question?
Isaac_black
Isaac_blackAuthor

i see what you are trying to say, that review was in my 100 th chap, i was considering the 2 possibilities and the story was in early stages, now i am convinced that it is not a harem novel.

Yuki_55:His asking if this is a harem or not. If it turns out to be harem, non harem readers will leave. if it’s non harem, harem readers will be spamming comments, demanding harem… You lose eaither way… (well, not really, since you get viewers both ways)
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Maedreas
MaedreasLv13

thats good

Isaac_black:i see what you are trying to say, that review was in my 100 th chap, i was considering the 2 possibilities and the story was in early stages, now i am convinced that it is not a harem novel.
Yuki_55
Yuki_55Lv14

nice to know!

Isaac_black:i see what you are trying to say, that review was in my 100 th chap, i was considering the 2 possibilities and the story was in early stages, now i am convinced that it is not a harem novel.
paulspy_fn
paulspy_fnLv13

tbh I have no problem with a harem or non harem novel the problem with most non harem novels is the fact the mc is to dense like even if it won't end as a harem they have to at least consider or think about the other person's feeling

Isaac_black:i see what you are trying to say, that review was in my 100 th chap, i was considering the 2 possibilities and the story was in early stages, now i am convinced that it is not a harem novel.
Isaac_black
Isaac_blackAuthor

i see , well, i am speaking about my novel here. isiah is too damaged at the beginning , you could tell just feom the first chapters that having feelings for another person is going to be tough. but keep it in mind there is a romance tag

paulspy_fn:tbh I have no problem with a harem or non harem novel the problem with most non harem novels is the fact the mc is to dense like even if it won't end as a harem they have to at least consider or think about the other person's feeling
ImmortalFantasy
ImmortalFantasyLv4

Will the FL be strong? I don't really like trope like saving the heroin or stuff. I like when FLs can fight side by side or support. Anyway seems interesting, I will the novel. (The comment is in a nice and respectable tone)

Isaac_black:i see what you are trying to say, that review was in my 100 th chap, i was considering the 2 possibilities and the story was in early stages, now i am convinced that it is not a harem novel.
Isaac_black
Isaac_blackAuthor

the fl characters in the novel will have different power levels, there are some who are weak and some who are strong . isiah right now (in the current chapters) is not interested in any of them and he ia focused on his goals , however, all i can say to you right now is that the love interest for isiah is not going to be pathetic ... thank you

ImmortalFantasy:Will the FL be strong? I don't really like trope like saving the heroin or stuff. I like when FLs can fight side by side or support. Anyway seems interesting, I will the novel. (The comment is in a nice and respectable tone)
ImmortalFantasy
ImmortalFantasyLv4

Thank you

Isaac_black:the fl characters in the novel will have different power levels, there are some who are weak and some who are strong . isiah right now (in the current chapters) is not interested in any of them and he ia focused on his goals , however, all i can say to you right now is that the love interest for isiah is not going to be pathetic ... thank you
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Ancient_
Ancient_Lv14

Hope there isn't any romance, completely ruins the story

Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

before I start reading is this novel dropped? you should have added the no-harem tag so that I could have read this sooner

Isaac_black:i see what you are trying to say, that review was in my 100 th chap, i was considering the 2 possibilities and the story was in early stages, now i am convinced that it is not a harem novel.
Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

same question for your other book villain supremacy

Ashborn1609:before I start reading is this novel dropped? you should have added the no-harem tag so that I could have read this sooner
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tatsuya_K_O_A
tatsuya_K_O_ALv14

if mc turn evil will that still be considered an anti-hero?? i honestly don't think so.

Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

I’ve seen 10x more non-harem “sect” reviews spamming than harem “sect” reviews, but continue putting non-harem on a pedestal, I guess.

Yuki_55:His asking if this is a harem or not. If it turns out to be harem, non harem readers will leave. if it’s non harem, harem readers will be spamming comments, demanding harem… You lose eaither way… (well, not really, since you get viewers both ways)
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Yuki_55
Yuki_55Lv14

sure?… but when did I? I took neither side, just stated the facts. thou it is true that I hate harem, when writing this comment I took no side…

Kw0z:I’ve seen 10x more non-harem “sect” reviews spamming than harem “sect” reviews, but continue putting non-harem on a pedestal, I guess.
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

It was obvious enough which side you took. You basically said “the harem lovers will hate on you for no reason, and the non-harem lovers will just leave”

Yuki_55:sure?… but when did I? I took neither side, just stated the facts. thou it is true that I hate harem, when writing this comment I took no side…
Yuki_55
Yuki_55Lv14

but is it not true? will a non-harem reader read a harem book? stating facts dosent mean you are picking sides…

Kw0z:It was obvious enough which side you took. You basically said “the harem lovers will hate on you for no reason, and the non-harem lovers will just leave”
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

It’s useless talking to an idiot, so I’ll end the conversation here.

Yuki_55:but is it not true? will a non-harem reader read a harem book? stating facts dosent mean you are picking sides…
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