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pika_17330Lv21yr
2023-05-20 18:16

i read this when it was still updating. it started good but thats it. it started good. Mc's character was so hopelessly bad that readers started dropping it..... along with a broken system. world building was horrible. the novel got dropped before we could see the world outside of a few cities. chapters are very very short and were just written to get more side money

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Aditya_0814Lv12

haha..... really i mean novel wasn't very bad, it could get better , there are many things, like: 1, a new character of light which was shown in latest chapter , i was interested in her relationship with old Leo. 2, there are 4 main continent 2 for human in which golden continent focus on swordsman ship and magic continent for magic , 1 for vampires and one continent where monster (powerful) ruled. but got know nothing about any continent . 3, MC could go for treasure hunt to find elder legacy . if it continues it could be very best because of World hich he was in , we got nothing about vampires and s rank monster. we got nothing about relationship between characters. don't know why author decide to drop it with this type of potential .😮‍💨 well, to tell you the truth, i am new to the world of webnovels and like this one very much..... could you give me some advice of similar type of novels in which academy , magic , system are involved. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE 🥺

castrixLv14

Library of heavens path, my disciples are all villain. Those are pretty good

Aditya_0814:haha..... really i mean novel wasn't very bad, it could get better , there are many things, like: 1, a new character of light which was shown in latest chapter , i was interested in her relationship with old Leo. 2, there are 4 main continent 2 for human in which golden continent focus on swordsman ship and magic continent for magic , 1 for vampires and one continent where monster (powerful) ruled. but got know nothing about any continent . 3, MC could go for treasure hunt to find elder legacy . if it continues it could be very best because of World hich he was in , we got nothing about vampires and s rank monster. we got nothing about relationship between characters. don't know why author decide to drop it with this type of potential .😮‍💨 well, to tell you the truth, i am new to the world of webnovels and like this one very much..... could you give me some advice of similar type of novels in which academy , magic , system are involved. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE 🥺
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