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pika_17330
pika_17330Lv21yr
2023-05-21 02:16

i read this when it was still updating. it started good but thats it. it started good. Mc's character was so hopelessly bad that readers started dropping it..... along with a broken system. world building was horrible. the novel got dropped before we could see the world outside of a few cities. chapters are very very short and were just written to get more side money

Magic System in a Parallel World

MyLittleBrother
4.6
245 Chs

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Aditya_0814
Aditya_0814Lv12

haha..... really i mean novel wasn't very bad, it could get better , there are many things, like: 1, a new character of light which was shown in latest chapter , i was interested in her relationship with old Leo. 2, there are 4 main continent 2 for human in which golden continent focus on swordsman ship and magic continent for magic , 1 for vampires and one continent where monster (powerful) ruled. but got know nothing about any continent . 3, MC could go for treasure hunt to find elder legacy . if it continues it could be very best because of World hich he was in , we got nothing about vampires and s rank monster. we got nothing about relationship between characters. don't know why author decide to drop it with this type of potential .😮‍💨 well, to tell you the truth, i am new to the world of webnovels and like this one very much..... could you give me some advice of similar type of novels in which academy , magic , system are involved. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE 🥺

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castrix
castrixLv14

Library of heavens path, my disciples are all villain. Those are pretty good

Aditya_0814:haha..... really i mean novel wasn't very bad, it could get better , there are many things, like: 1, a new character of light which was shown in latest chapter , i was interested in her relationship with old Leo. 2, there are 4 main continent 2 for human in which golden continent focus on swordsman ship and magic continent for magic , 1 for vampires and one continent where monster (powerful) ruled. but got know nothing about any continent . 3, MC could go for treasure hunt to find elder legacy . if it continues it could be very best because of World hich he was in , we got nothing about vampires and s rank monster. we got nothing about relationship between characters. don't know why author decide to drop it with this type of potential .😮‍💨 well, to tell you the truth, i am new to the world of webnovels and like this one very much..... could you give me some advice of similar type of novels in which academy , magic , system are involved. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE 🥺
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c'mon you know this is our little brother, it is definitely going to be good. It is similar to cultivation online with somewhat naive MC but without cultivation part. The world is an urban one with magic and artifacts, so it is refreshing to see such change. Mc is op just like yuan, he can learn magic easily because of his magic system. we can already see 3-4 harem members so idk which route it is going to take... innocent yuan type or smug su yang type xD. I am ok with both tbh, it will be great if he balances out things in this one. There's mystery involved as you may already know, our little brother likes to write stories of MCs with mysterious pasts. and it's already getting interesting so far. World settings looks great with magic elements, academic arc, his predecessor's enemies as well as swordmanship talent...our mc will have to go through alot in order to live somewhat comfortable life. Here Mc doesn't get his predecessor's memories too even after getting a system so that's refreshing too. He has his teacher/uhu uhu uk what I mean as well as a ghost? to be a guide so there's np. conclusion: If you like op mc with somewhat innocent nature and this is our little brother so there is not going to be a problem with story progression or world building...so do join the ride. If he doesn't decide to drop this, that is. Thank you, peace.

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As always, MLB does not disappoint. This novel has been great so far and I can’t wait to see how it continues. However, please make sure not to abandon your other novels, though it’s okay to focus on this one for a bit. Dual Cultivation and Cultivation Online don’t seem to be getting updated currently, and I would hate for them to be cut short.

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