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tortleLv32yr
2022-05-09 13:54

c'mon you know this is our little brother, it is definitely going to be good. It is similar to cultivation online with somewhat naive MC but without cultivation part. The world is an urban one with magic and artifacts, so it is refreshing to see such change. Mc is op just like yuan, he can learn magic easily because of his magic system. we can already see 3-4 harem members so idk which route it is going to take... innocent yuan type or smug su yang type xD. I am ok with both tbh, it will be great if he balances out things in this one. There's mystery involved as you may already know, our little brother likes to write stories of MCs with mysterious pasts. and it's already getting interesting so far. World settings looks great with magic elements, academic arc, his predecessor's enemies as well as swordmanship talent...our mc will have to go through alot in order to live somewhat comfortable life. Here Mc doesn't get his predecessor's memories too even after getting a system so that's refreshing too. He has his teacher/uhu uhu uk what I mean as well as a ghost? to be a guide so there's np. conclusion: If you like op mc with somewhat innocent nature and this is our little brother so there is not going to be a problem with story progression or world building...so do join the ride. If he doesn't decide to drop this, that is. Thank you, peace.

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_lone_soul
_lone_soulLv12

innocent yuan ?? who?

tortle
tortleLv3

lol idk if you are being serious or not...but if not then its cultivation online's mc.

_lone_soul:innocent yuan ?? who?
sblego11
sblego11Lv4

so great that the author feels the need to censor any kind of review below 4 stars LOL

tortle
tortleLv3

so desperate to comment the same thing over and over in every comment.

sblego11:so great that the author feels the need to censor any kind of review below 4 stars LOL
sblego11
sblego11Lv4

"so desperate" the entire thing literally took me 30 seconds LOL

tortle:so desperate to comment the same thing over and over in every comment.
tortle
tortleLv3

looks like its not your first time spamming eh

sblego11:"so desperate" the entire thing literally took me 30 seconds LOL
sblego11
sblego11Lv4

No, I just have motor skills above those of a 4 year old. 3 clicks and pressing ctrl+v is not exactly that difficult, but I guess it is for you

tortle:looks like its not your first time spamming eh
MADMAN_K
MADMAN_KLv10

Yeah because their all about the fact that this novel isn't worth dropping his other ones for, or the fact that this one will eventually get dropped once he comes out with another novel.

sblego11:so great that the author feels the need to censor any kind of review below 4 stars LOL
Hanimated
HanimatedLv1

Yeh this is gonna be so good, so good that the author has an aneurysm and drops it, like every other novel. MLB is just another waste of space author that spams mid qual novels to farm stones.

SayHelloToGrape999
SayHelloToGrape999Lv13

I agree with everything you said but he makes really good stories, not mid stories just the talent is going to waste cause all he does is drop them and all his novels do so good I don't get why he drops them tbh.

Hanimated:Yeh this is gonna be so good, so good that the author has an aneurysm and drops it, like every other novel. MLB is just another waste of space author that spams mid qual novels to farm stones.
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